Having another go at it, huh Cathy? I think there are many benefits to that approach. Almost every time I workshop an old poem I end up writing something new within a few days. Oh, and there's the IBPC nom -- congrats on that.

Thanks Mary! LOL Yes, I've just got so much going on right now that I don't have the desire to write anything... and even if I did my muse seems to have turned to dust!

I'll leave the critique to others, as I'm not into repetitive forms -- not to say that you haven't done a fine job with it. I enjoyed reading the thread. You had some people commenting back in November that I wish were here now. We know Fran's too busy for poetry these days but I'm wondering if anyone knows what became of Maxim, whose last appearance here was in April. I haven't had the pleasure of meeting him or reading his work before, but I've just now become an instant fan.

I miss all of them! I've always loved Maxim's work and when he came back in April I was delighted. I don't know what's happened to him.

Sorry to digress. Good luck with the poem.

Thank you Mary!

Hugs~
Cathy

Mary

Hi Cathy,

Just popping in to say how much I love this. Nothing for me to do but sit here and enjoy, love when that happens. Strange I haven't come across it till now?? Time for terry to take a trip to the optician, me-thinks.

Anyway, bravo.

Best Wishes.