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Aug 11 18, 13:53
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flies lapped up the rot after regurgitating; digestion aided
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Aug 12 18, 06:30
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digestion aided by a handful of raisins; a blow-out followed
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Aug 12 18, 18:33
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a blowout followed when the whale surfaced to breathe; krill tasted nasty
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Aug 13 18, 07:04
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krill tasted nasty; 'twas his first experience inside of a whale
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Aug 13 18, 13:03
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inside of a whale is where Jonah found himself; washed after shore leave
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Aug 14 18, 11:38
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shore left him washed up as a model hermit crab; he was surrounded
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Aug 15 18, 14:49
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he was surrounded by a pack of hyenas; no laughing matter
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Aug 15 18, 16:11
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no laughing matter: the boards, nails, paint and gypsum didn't even smile
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Aug 16 18, 09:23
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didn’t even smile when rangers cut off his tusks; tickled ivories
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Aug 16 18, 11:01
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tickled ivories with her feather-soft paws smitten kitten
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Aug 17 18, 07:52
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a smitten kitten tries to play with anything; sprinkle some catnip
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Aug 21 18, 07:29
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Sprinkles the cat napped Sparkles the giant bulldog; talk about fur-works!
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Aug 22 18, 14:56
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a bout works for talk in the animal kingdom; some biting remarks
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Aug 24 18, 13:35
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some biting re-marks the gnawing on the door; the dog wants outside
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Aug 25 18, 20:06
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the dog wants outside to be part of the inside; he’ll fetch anything
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Aug 28 18, 08:58
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he fetches his thing to clean it after tinkle; gives self a leg up
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Aug 30 18, 12:58
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gives self a leg up when marking territory; they pause on three paws
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Sep 6 18, 12:53
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they pause on three paws during the bird dog field trials; nose knows where to point
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Sep 26 18, 17:58
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knows nowhere to point surrounded by predators; porcupine quills fly
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Oct 9 18, 10:40
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porch in pine quells flies with its pungent aroma; shoo out in dead wood
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