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post Aug 9 05, 16:07
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Argh!

I am holding my hands over my ears, arghing.
I'll scream again -
                           argh -
                                      but
                                             you
                                                     can't
                                                              see
                                                                     or
                                                                          hear.

I'm too polite; not wanting to hurt your feelings;

                                        if
                                  I erupted,
                               it would only
                            make things worse.

But oh! To have leapt, like you, from the womb,
replete with the sum total of knowledge in the universe:
scientist, artist, wit, wag and all things double you.

I wish I could let rip;
I'm plastic faced,
stiff as tulle,
and as transparent.

I am  dakhma;
        Trappist;
        bit-lipped;
        as a grave.

Right, that's it,
you've done it now.
I'm going to be he-rude-ite;
construct an argument so nice;
dense, devilish, daedal,
that once lured in,
you will never escape ...

I wish ...

Argh!


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Argh!

I am holding my hands over my ears and arghing.
I'll scream again -
                           argh -
                                      but
                                             you
                                                     can't
                                                              see
                                                                     or
                                                                          hear.

I'm just too polite; not wanting to hurt your feelings;

                                        if
                                  I erupted,
                               it would only
                            make things worse.

But oh! To have leapt, like you, from the womb,
replete with the sum total of knowledge in the universe:
scientist, artist, wit, wag and all things double you.

I wish I could let rip;
I'm plastic faced,
stiff as tulle,
and about as transparent.

I am  dakhma;
        Trappist;
        bit-lipped;
        as a grave.

Right, that's it,
you've done it now.
I'm going to be he-rude-ite;
construct an argument so nice;
dense, devilish, daedal,
that once sucked in,
you will never get out ...

I wish ...

Argh!




 
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Psyche
post Aug 16 05, 22:15
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Real Name: Sylvia Evelyn Maclagan
Writer of: Poetry & Prose
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Hi Cleo !   sun.gif


Psssstt - oh Psyche ....

Why GollY! I know the PUUURRRRFECT   award!

The Faery Award fits your idea here.....


Whatcha think?



Arghhhh !!!!  Speechless.gif  :p  ghostface.gif

But if ya ain't got anything more transgressive for this rebel called Mike, then it's the Faery Award, definitely. I shall try to find my way back to the Nom's forum right away... and once there, I shall make one of my own transgressive suggestions for Noms that nobody takes note of....ha...ha....  oops.gif  upside.gif

Arghhhhh......!!!

Wonderful poem, Mike, don't mind me, I'm the one that starts arguments and then slips off to have a beer with me pals...  grinning.gif  cheer.gif

Best,
Sylvia  turtle.gif






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- Billydo   Argh   Aug 9 05, 16:07
- - Psyche   Hey Mike ! Happened on this just before bedt...   Aug 9 05, 22:09
- - Nina   Hi Mike Ah, you have summed up the story of my li...   Aug 10 05, 01:02
- - Billydo   Hi Sylvia Me, a transgressor? Surely not. Can I h...   Aug 10 05, 11:53
- - Billydo   Hi Nina This was an incident at work when I but m...   Aug 10 05, 11:55
- - Cleo_Serapis   Tee hee! Why is it SHE always has the last word?...   Aug 10 05, 19:15
- - Billydo   Hi Cleo Thank you very much. Cheers Mike   Aug 11 05, 04:35
- - Psyche   QUOTE(Billydo @ Aug. 10 2005, 14:53)Hi Sylvia...   Aug 11 05, 12:55
- - Cleo_Serapis   QUOTE(Psyche @ Aug. 11 2005, 13:55)Hi Mike ! ...   Aug 11 05, 19:19
- - Billydo   Hi Cleo Thanks you very much. I'm pleased you...   Aug 16 05, 16:16
- - Billydo   Ooh ta! I'm of to the Lake District to wa...   Aug 17 05, 02:21
- - Jox   Hi Mike.... I take it your yellow things are alre...   Aug 17 05, 02:35
- - Billydo   Ta James Just killin' time while they complet...   Aug 17 05, 03:28
- - Jox   M, You haven't built them a bathroom each??? ...   Aug 17 05, 03:40
- - Cleo_Serapis   Congrats Mike on your faery award winning tile! ...   Aug 19 05, 05:21
- - Nina   Hi Mike Congratulations on your Faery Award for t...   Aug 19 05, 06:44
- - Jox   Well done Mike - "Join MM and get a Free Faery" - ...   Aug 19 05, 07:23
- - Cathy   Congratulations on a well deserved award!!   Aug 19 05, 08:26
- - Don   Congrats on you latest award. Don   Aug 19 05, 09:02
- - Billydo   Thanks y'all. Being a transgressor, I would l...   Aug 19 05, 13:45
- - Jox   Hi Mike, The Nude is fine - I do't think anyo...   Aug 19 05, 16:30
- - Psyche   QUOTE(Billydo @ Aug. 19 2005, 16:45)Thanks y...   Aug 20 05, 10:28
- - Billydo   Hi James No Wainright, but I did have a map in a ...   Aug 21 05, 04:11
- - Billydo   Hi Sylvia Thank you for nominating me for the awa...   Aug 21 05, 04:19

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