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 Dec 5 17, 15:49
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 Assyrian  Posts: 250 Joined: 1-November 15 Member No.: 5,282 Real Name: richard chase Writer of: Poetry Referred By:Rhapsody  |
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I looked out this morning, blues ‘s far as I could see mmmm-hmmmmm-mm, blues ‘s far as I could see checked my mail, blues was all addressed to me I went an’ picked up my guitar blues fell out like rain Yahh – ohh – mmmhmmm – mm fell out like rain An empty pillow your side ‘a the bed all that remain I’m gonna ride on down on the coast at Gulfport Ride on down, down on the coast at Gulfport Swim on out ‘til these blues sink to tha ocean floor Ain’t goin’ nowhere, just spinnin’ my back wheels mmm-hah-mmm-mm-mm spinnin’ my back wheels you evah had tha heartache you know how it feels change your mind baby, better keep it to yourself oh yah, baby, mmmmm-hmm- keep it to yourself used to these blues now, I don’t want nothin’ else keep it to yourself I’m used to these blues I don’ want nothin’ else |
  
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 Ornate Oracle  Posts: 8,853 Joined: 27-August 04 From: Bariloche, Argentine Patagonia Member No.: 78 Real Name: Sylvia Evelyn Maclagan Writer of: Poetry & Prose Referred By:David Ting |
Great one, RC!! Just love it when you make a recording of your work.
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