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K.S. Lenk
post Nov 27 15, 13:09
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Household

The relish of silence,
of quiet furniture in wait
before the act of violence
occurs, a fate

that cannot be absolved.
A use, a switch flicked,
a force to be involved
in which they feel tricked

into participation
of existence, of a share
in accommodation,
a nerve laid bare

as unspeaking, they serve.
In grace they curve.
 
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K.S. Lenk
post Nov 29 15, 17:27
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Hi Cleo,

No of course I don't mind. I didn't myself, because I felt inadequate in giving feedback to other entries and I know this is a requirement for posting. As I write mostly FV myself, I'm not sure how to approach the rhyming ones. I do love them though and often read them with a slight touch of envy :) I make rare attempts myself, just don't feel I've found a tone or voice in it yet.

Thank you.

Regards ,
K.
 
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