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Larry
post Feb 4 16, 19:45
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Hearts and Flavors

Chase and choice have gone over the hills
and that glow on horizons just chills.
Inspired now, I’ve professed
this new class of drug’s best;
citrus flavored magenta heart pills.


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If you don't understand this, you are probably still nice and young with a full life in front of you!


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Kindness is a seed sown by the gentlest hand, growing care's flowers.
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JLY
post Feb 5 16, 14:52
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Larry,
This was a fun read and I really enjoyed your description of the heart pills. It was a fun diversion on my snowy day.
JLY


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post Feb 5 16, 15:48
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Having spent most of my life drug-free, I did relent and am taking blood pressure pills. I wasn't really in a danger area, but doc figgered it best to bring it down a wee bit. Since I basically refuse to take all the pills he wants to prescribe me, I am taking these, and they are actually doing their thing.

Back to the Limerick -- I wouldn't have thought of compressing into one. I do tend to run off more often than not. Well done, Larry.

Later,

Merlin


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