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 Dec 31 15, 09:35
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 Ornate Oracle  Posts: 18,560 Joined: 2-August 03 From: Southwest New Jersey, USA Member No.: 6 Real Name: Daniel J Ricketts, Sr. Writer of: Poetry Referred By:Lori  |
The following is the result of Larry's and my playing down in Karnak Crosssing. This particular form is called a Lanturne:
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l a n d I n g m a k e s....p I l o t p u l l.... p a r a c h u t e c o r d . . . . . . . . o -O- /\ ·······  ·······Slow down; things will go faster!
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 Mosaic Master  Posts: 18,892 Joined: 1-August 03 From: Massachusetts Member No.: 2 Real Name: Lori Kanter Writer of: Poetry & Prose Referred By:Imhotep |
Very inventive Daniel!
 I like the poetic form AND the visual display! It can be challenging to do on this forum software!  Cheers, ~Cleo 
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