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 Aug 19 03, 11:43
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 Mosaic Master  Posts: 18,892 Joined: 1-August 03 From: Massachusetts Member No.: 2 Real Name: Lori Kanter Writer of: Poetry & Prose Referred By:Imhotep  |
Delectable Discoveries
Safari fluttered along a path to nowhere, cerulean blue ponds greeting a swallow of sojourn. The fragrance of vivid violets and poignant plum trees tantalized her sagacity pursuing gray gravel. Sweet William and pale yellow yarrow moonshine reinforce her craving to dive into this delectable discovery. Resting on brown rock cress mud puddles, “Siberian”, the tiger swallowtail, indulges rosy-flowered sizzling swamp Milkweed. Satiating strawberries and lemon mint mingle with white baby’s breath wrapping vigorous vines aloft. Safari takes flight following the path to ecstasy. She spots Siberian, flutters past and lands on bundled black-eyed susan. To her amazement, just beyond lies a countryside of purple asters, lavender and pink coreopsis nosing for a nibble. Siberian wastes no time feeding on the red bee balm hidden by tall forest green and buttery beige grasses. In the frenzy, the two take their fill of orange- golden marjoram, crimson clover, red snapdragon and maroon sedum, scarcely saluting the others prowling presence. At the conclusion of the journey, Nature’s nectars find meaning in life. If only Safari and Siberian had? Copyright © 2004 Lorraine M Kanter ·······  ·······"It's a dangerous business, Frodo, going out your door. You step into the Road, and if you don't keep your feet, there is no knowing where you might be swept off to." ~ J.R.R Tolkien, The Lord of the Rings
Collaboration feeds innovation. In the spirit of workshopping, please revisit those threads you've critiqued to see if the author has incorporated your ideas, or requests further feedback from you. In addition, reciprocate with those who've responded to you in kind. "I believe it is the act of remembrance, long after our bones have turned to dust, to be the true essence of an afterlife." ~ Lorraine M. Kanter Nominate a poem for the InterBoard Poetry Competition by taking into careful consideration those poems you feel would best represent Mosaic Musings. For details, click into the IBPC nomination forum. Did that poem just captivate you? Nominate it for the Faery award today! If perfection of form allured your muse, propose the Crown Jewels award. For more information, click here!  "Worry looks around, Sorry looks back, Faith looks up." ~ Early detection can save your life.MM Award Winner           |
  
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 Sep 4 03, 22:58
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Abundantly graceful, as mysterious as a bit of winged discovery trailside,
as immediate as breathing familiarity, and appropriately foreign. Fully appreciating, Brahms |
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Oct 19 03, 15:18
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Mosaic Master Posts: 18,892 Joined: 1-August 03 From: Massachusetts Member No.: 2 Real Name: Lori Kanter Writer of: Poetry & Prose Referred By:Imhotep |
QUOTE (Brahms @ Sep. 04 2003, 23:58) Abundantly graceful, as mysterious as a bit of winged discovery trailside, as immediate as breathing familiarity, and appropriately foreign. Fully appreciating, Brahms Hi Brahms! Thanks so much for commenting! :lovie: HUGAROOS! ~Cleo :pharoah: ······· ·······"It's a dangerous business, Frodo, going out your door. You step into the Road, and if you don't keep your feet, there is no knowing where you might be swept off to." ~ J.R.R Tolkien, The Lord of the Rings
Collaboration feeds innovation. In the spirit of workshopping, please revisit those threads you've critiqued to see if the author has incorporated your ideas, or requests further feedback from you. In addition, reciprocate with those who've responded to you in kind. "I believe it is the act of remembrance, long after our bones have turned to dust, to be the true essence of an afterlife." ~ Lorraine M. Kanter Nominate a poem for the InterBoard Poetry Competition by taking into careful consideration those poems you feel would best represent Mosaic Musings. For details, click into the IBPC nomination forum. Did that poem just captivate you? Nominate it for the Faery award today! If perfection of form allured your muse, propose the Crown Jewels award. For more information, click here! "Worry looks around, Sorry looks back, Faith looks up." ~ Early detection can save your life.MM Award Winner |
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