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JustDaniel
post Dec 24 03, 21:57
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I ain't never read it...

and it's striking...

like we'd never met afore.

sLightly stunned, Daniel  :sun:


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Siren
post Dec 17 03, 03:12
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Oh Now Cleo,

You now me and my quirks!!!! Glad you loved this...

Dani:D


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post Dec 17 03, 03:13
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Hello Dolly,

Yes this is an old one and you've probably read it in the other site... Thanks for commenting here too... and your prayers are much appreciated...


Daniah :)


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Athena
post Dec 16 03, 21:00
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Hi Dani,

Methinks I've read this one before and I liked it when I read it then!  It's a cutie-pie ... and yes, you "got me", too!   laugh.gif

Prayers continue for your husband's family, you, and yours.

Blessings,
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Cleo_Serapis
post Dec 15 03, 21:05
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Wonderful meta44444's Daniah!

You GOT me! LOL!

~Cleo Pharoah.gif


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post Dec 14 03, 11:20
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Unexplainable
how love and hate
could be intertwined
in a single web
of emotions.

How I hate
going through
your hidden layers,
forcing them
to reveal all to me,
then cry
at the blinding pain
I see.

How I love your
mouthwatering taste
to linger
as it pierces through
my open lips,
flooding my
pulsating senses
with your
throat-drying
heat.

Unexplainable
are those feelings
soaring through me
in one full sweep.

Flooding tears
blend with
moans of pleasure.

Answer me then:

How could I
enjoy a meal
without throwing
a couple
of onions
in the mixture?


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