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 Mosaic Master  Posts: 18,892 Joined: 1-August 03 From: Massachusetts Member No.: 2 Real Name: Lori Kanter Writer of: Poetry & Prose Referred By:Imhotep  |
Hi Folks~
 Following Dolly's lead here and after reading and interacting with you all in the Haiku and Tetractys Train threads, I've decided to start a SEPARATE thread for an Interactive Cinquain Train. Same rules (to quote Dolly): I'll write a cinquain, and then the next person begins theirs with the last line of mine, the next person begins theirs with the last line on that one, etc. They do NOT have to be on the same subject, but they CAN be if you wish. It's all up to YOU! Whattaya think? Shall we give it a go? How about attempting to write one a day for 15 or 30 days in a row? Anyone game to commit to this endeavor? I'll begin this thread: Angels;
behest His love. Seldom seen, always felt, everlasting serenity. Guide us. ·······  ·······"It's a dangerous business, Frodo, going out your door. You step into the Road, and if you don't keep your feet, there is no knowing where you might be swept off to." ~ J.R.R Tolkien, The Lord of the Rings
Collaboration feeds innovation. In the spirit of workshopping, please revisit those threads you've critiqued to see if the author has incorporated your ideas, or requests further feedback from you. In addition, reciprocate with those who've responded to you in kind. "I believe it is the act of remembrance, long after our bones have turned to dust, to be the true essence of an afterlife." ~ Lorraine M. Kanter Nominate a poem for the InterBoard Poetry Competition by taking into careful consideration those poems you feel would best represent Mosaic Musings. For details, click into the IBPC nomination forum. Did that poem just captivate you? Nominate it for the Faery award today! If perfection of form allured your muse, propose the Crown Jewels award. For more information, click here!  "Worry looks around, Sorry looks back, Faith looks up." ~ Early detection can save your life.MM Award Winner           |
  
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Feb 1 04, 20:32
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Dear Cleo
I'm game, see below : THE XXXVIIITH PSALM Guide us, walkie-talk man, right into the end zone more times than the opposition, we pray ! Alan McAlpine Douglas |
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Feb 1 04, 20:51
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Mosaic Master Posts: 18,892 Joined: 1-August 03 From: Massachusetts Member No.: 2 Real Name: Lori Kanter Writer of: Poetry & Prose Referred By:Imhotep |
Clever!
······· ·······"It's a dangerous business, Frodo, going out your door. You step into the Road, and if you don't keep your feet, there is no knowing where you might be swept off to." ~ J.R.R Tolkien, The Lord of the Rings
Collaboration feeds innovation. In the spirit of workshopping, please revisit those threads you've critiqued to see if the author has incorporated your ideas, or requests further feedback from you. In addition, reciprocate with those who've responded to you in kind. "I believe it is the act of remembrance, long after our bones have turned to dust, to be the true essence of an afterlife." ~ Lorraine M. Kanter Nominate a poem for the InterBoard Poetry Competition by taking into careful consideration those poems you feel would best represent Mosaic Musings. For details, click into the IBPC nomination forum. Did that poem just captivate you? Nominate it for the Faery award today! If perfection of form allured your muse, propose the Crown Jewels award. For more information, click here! "Worry looks around, Sorry looks back, Faith looks up." ~ Early detection can save your life.MM Award Winner |
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Feb 2 04, 00:47
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Egyptian  Posts: 427 Joined: 5-August 03 From: Oregon, USA Member No.: 8 Real Name: Dolly Writer of: Poetry |
Thank you, Lori! Yes, I really like interactive poetry and I sure like yours!Here's mine, beginning with Alan's last two words:
for all we want and hope for all the rest. Don't have to agree with what's best for us. © D R Harris |
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Feb 2 04, 05:45
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CON-FESS
For us to survive well, there must be honesty; so I con-fess I've never lied, in truth ..... Alan McAlpine Douglas |
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Feb 2 04, 09:45
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 Ornate Oracle Posts: 18,560 Joined: 2-August 03 From: Southwest New Jersey, USA Member No.: 6 Real Name: Daniel J Ricketts, Sr. Writer of: Poetry Referred By:Lori |
It’s true; I saw it
in truth we all must lie if we would sleep at night; alas, I make it hard for her… I snore © Daniel J Ricketts 02 Feb 2004 ······· ·······Slow down; things will go faster!
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Feb 2 04, 10:17
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I MARRIED EWE
I snore, she says; she lies; and she lies "wide awake" counting the sheep she's married to; in dreams ..... Alan McAlpine Douglas |
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Feb 2 04, 12:39
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In dreams
I watch you sleep, brush hair off your temple, curl my finger around it and sigh. |
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Feb 2 04, 16:47
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SACRIFICIAL
and sigh, and weep, and die, ye sacrificed women, whose lands have become the playground of war ..... Alan McAlpine Douglas |
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Feb 3 04, 14:49
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of war--
when time as drums incessantly sounding remind us of mortality in death |
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Feb 4 04, 08:07
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Ornate Oracle Posts: 18,560 Joined: 2-August 03 From: Southwest New Jersey, USA Member No.: 6 Real Name: Daniel J Ricketts, Sr. Writer of: Poetry Referred By:Lori |
 in death I see the end of struggles here below; new life with Him Who rose again awaits © Daniel J Ricketts 04 Feb 2004 ······· ·······Slow down; things will go faster!
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Feb 4 04, 16:48
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Egyptian Posts: 427 Joined: 5-August 03 From: Oregon, USA Member No.: 8 Real Name: Dolly Writer of: Poetry |
without us still we yet have work to do do not rush the going patience © D R Harris - 4 February 2004 All rights reserved as an unpublished work |
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Feb 4 04, 20:45
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PROLE PRODS PRONE
Patients are those who wait lying supine and prone to prodding doctors with little patience ..... Alan McAlpine Douglas |
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Feb 4 04, 22:15
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Egyptian Posts: 427 Joined: 5-August 03 From: Oregon, USA Member No.: 8 Real Name: Dolly Writer of: Poetry |
Patience is what we seek endeavoring each day we strive harder becoming strong we hope © D R Harris - 4 February 2004 All rights reserved as an unpublished work. |
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Feb 4 04, 23:20
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Ornate Oracle Posts: 18,560 Joined: 2-August 03 From: Southwest New Jersey, USA Member No.: 6 Real Name: Daniel J Ricketts, Sr. Writer of: Poetry Referred By:Lori |
Visa Versa
wee hope for pro-State men and those in-continent who yearn to go restrictedly abroad ······· ·······Slow down; things will go faster!
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Feb 4 04, 23:33
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Egyptian Posts: 427 Joined: 5-August 03 From: Oregon, USA Member No.: 8 Real Name: Dolly Writer of: Poetry |
Abroad just to be safe maybe wear diapers. In-continent wise to be dry make plans © D R Harris - 4 February 2004 All rights reserved as an unpublished work. |
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Feb 5 04, 02:55
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WATER WORLD
Make plans, if going away, to be flushed with success if intending to take, or make, water ..... Alan McAlpine Douglas |
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Feb 5 04, 06:54
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Ornate Oracle Posts: 18,560 Joined: 2-August 03 From: Southwest New Jersey, USA Member No.: 6 Real Name: Daniel J Ricketts, Sr. Writer of: Poetry Referred By:Lori |
home cultivation
water tender violet whisper her name gently ‘til she unfolds inside herself delight © Daniel J Ricketts 06 Feb 2004 ······· ·······Slow down; things will go faster!
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Feb 7 04, 21:18
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Egyptian Posts: 427 Joined: 5-August 03 From: Oregon, USA Member No.: 8 Real Name: Dolly Writer of: Poetry |
de light shines upon us when we humble ourselves to receive it ... the Father knows the time © D R Harris - 7 February 2004 |
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Feb 8 04, 06:22
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Ornate Oracle Posts: 18,560 Joined: 2-August 03 From: Southwest New Jersey, USA Member No.: 6 Real Name: Daniel J Ricketts, Sr. Writer of: Poetry Referred By:Lori |
All spies
the thyme each seasoning all sounds in our eras our run home from the big inning …He nose © Daniel J Ricketts 08 Fab 2004 ······· ·······Slow down; things will go faster!
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