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 Ornate Oracle  Posts: 18,560 Joined: 2-August 03 From: Southwest New Jersey, USA Member No.: 6 Real Name: Daniel J Ricketts, Sr. Writer of: Poetry Referred By:Lori  |
 Good night,  Ms Morning… it’s in all of us!  winter warm-up white sheet covers her where we’ll ride the morning sun; starting engine now © Daniel J Ricketts 18 Feb 2004 ·······  ·······Slow down; things will go faster!
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Feb 19 04, 12:27
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 Ornate Oracle Posts: 3,660 Joined: 23-August 03 From: Somerset, England Member No.: 22 Real Name: Grace Writer of: Poetry & Prose |
Hi Daniel
 QUOTE winter warm-up white sheet covers her where we’ll ride the morning sun; starting engine now 'ride the morning sun' Just beautiful.  newsprint to footprint banner headlines recycled; bag lady moves on Grace ······· ······· Love
Grace  http://mysite.orange.co.uk/graceingreece Life is not measured by the number of breaths we take, but by the moments that take our breath away. Nominate a tile for the Crown Jewels and Faery Awards today! For details, go to the Valley of the Kings! MM Award Winner        |
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Feb 19 04, 17:36
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Ornate Oracle Posts: 18,560 Joined: 2-August 03 From: Southwest New Jersey, USA Member No.: 6 Real Name: Daniel J Ricketts, Sr. Writer of: Poetry Referred By:Lori |
Thank you, Grace. Very nice piece here...
and I simply could not resist my impish muse's proddings: watered-down news newsprint to paw print; banner screaming major leak now bleeds with puppy’s © Daniel J Ricketts 19 Feb 2004 ······· ·······Slow down; things will go faster!
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Feb 20 04, 01:58
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 Egyptian Posts: 427 Joined: 5-August 03 From: Oregon, USA Member No.: 8 Real Name: Dolly Writer of: Poetry |
Oh, Daniel, that one is cute! Funny! I think only YOU and your muse could come up with that one, but it's good!
 Nature's Secrets our trees sit idly waiting for spring's warmth to come their secrets silent © D R Harris - 19 February 2004 |
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Feb 20 04, 04:27
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Ornate Oracle Posts: 3,660 Joined: 23-August 03 From: Somerset, England Member No.: 22 Real Name: Grace Writer of: Poetry & Prose |
Hello Dolly,
Very nice thought. Idle on the outside maybe, but working frantically internally to produce the next generation. More like a pregnant pause  suggestion of Spring - gnarled autumn leaf cupping snow caught in a time warp Love Grace ······· ······· Love
Grace http://mysite.orange.co.uk/graceingreece Life is not measured by the number of breaths we take, but by the moments that take our breath away. Nominate a tile for the Crown Jewels and Faery Awards today! For details, go to the Valley of the Kings! MM Award Winner |
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Feb 20 04, 04:31
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Ornate Oracle Posts: 3,660 Joined: 23-August 03 From: Somerset, England Member No.: 22 Real Name: Grace Writer of: Poetry & Prose |
Good Morning Daniel,
 Oh! that puppy!! I can see his expression afterwards, conveying the sentiment "What! Me?" Simply lovely. Love Grace ······· ······· Love
Grace http://mysite.orange.co.uk/graceingreece Life is not measured by the number of breaths we take, but by the moments that take our breath away. Nominate a tile for the Crown Jewels and Faery Awards today! For details, go to the Valley of the Kings! MM Award Winner |
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Feb 20 04, 10:19
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Ornate Oracle Posts: 18,560 Joined: 2-August 03 From: Southwest New Jersey, USA Member No.: 6 Real Name: Daniel J Ricketts, Sr. Writer of: Poetry Referred By:Lori |
Hey, Dolly and Grace!
Great stuff... and look what you've mused! surprise season pregnantly resting lady tulips coil their spring to give men a pause © M Lee Dickens’son 20 Feb 2003 ······· ·······Slow down; things will go faster!
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Feb 21 04, 04:18
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Ornate Oracle Posts: 3,660 Joined: 23-August 03 From: Somerset, England Member No.: 22 Real Name: Grace Writer of: Poetry & Prose |
Hello Daniel,
Love the last line Shame it doesn't happen though  silhouette heron pensive on the water’s edge- evanescing light Grace ······· ······· Love
Grace http://mysite.orange.co.uk/graceingreece Life is not measured by the number of breaths we take, but by the moments that take our breath away. Nominate a tile for the Crown Jewels and Faery Awards today! For details, go to the Valley of the Kings! MM Award Winner |
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Feb 21 04, 04:56
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Ornate Oracle Posts: 18,560 Joined: 2-August 03 From: Southwest New Jersey, USA Member No.: 6 Real Name: Daniel J Ricketts, Sr. Writer of: Poetry Referred By:Lori |
QUOTE (Cybele @ Feb. 21 2004, 03:18) Hello Daniel, Love the last line Shame it doesn't happen though silhouette heron pensive on the water’s edge- evanescing light Grace menopause doesn't give men a pause? I thought it might! Super haiku, Grace... It gives me the perfect occasion to show everyone the difference between true haiku and my 'HeadCase Haiku' or faux-ku wanton in drink
silly wet heron stands kung foo in dark… won ton spooning a light bit © Daniel J Ricketts 21 Feb 2004 ······· ·······Slow down; things will go faster!
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Feb 21 04, 08:24
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Ornate Oracle Posts: 3,660 Joined: 23-August 03 From: Somerset, England Member No.: 22 Real Name: Grace Writer of: Poetry & Prose |
Oh Daniel,
QUOTE silly wet heron stands kung foo in dark… won ton spooning a light bit You can always brighten my day with your faux-ku. What a wonderful sense of humour you have - I love it!  nodding percherons ploughing forty -acre field, evening paradise Love Grace ······· ······· Love
Grace http://mysite.orange.co.uk/graceingreece Life is not measured by the number of breaths we take, but by the moments that take our breath away. Nominate a tile for the Crown Jewels and Faery Awards today! For details, go to the Valley of the Kings! MM Award Winner |
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Feb 22 04, 03:00
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Egyptian Posts: 427 Joined: 5-August 03 From: Oregon, USA Member No.: 8 Real Name: Dolly Writer of: Poetry |
Heyyyy Everyone ..... these haiku are super! Here's my latest:
Dusk cools, primes for night; nightfall comes bearing own warmth; whispers from lovers © D R Harris - 21 February 2004 |
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Feb 24 04, 02:50
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Ornate Oracle Posts: 3,660 Joined: 23-August 03 From: Somerset, England Member No.: 22 Real Name: Grace Writer of: Poetry & Prose |
Hello Dolly,
A truly lovely piece with great imagery of the lovers. riffling the pages,
wind reads my abandoned book while I count daisies ······· ······· Love
Grace http://mysite.orange.co.uk/graceingreece Life is not measured by the number of breaths we take, but by the moments that take our breath away. Nominate a tile for the Crown Jewels and Faery Awards today! For details, go to the Valley of the Kings! MM Award Winner |
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Feb 25 04, 00:56
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Egyptian Posts: 427 Joined: 5-August 03 From: Oregon, USA Member No.: 8 Real Name: Dolly Writer of: Poetry |
Oh Grace,
I LOVE your haiku!! What a thought ... I could see and feel the breeze ... could gaze at the sky and those daisys, all though your well chosen words. Wonderful! My contribution for the day: knew rumors couldn't be true; music will ne'er die © D R Harris - 24 February 2004 |
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Feb 25 04, 02:08
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Ornate Oracle Posts: 3,660 Joined: 23-August 03 From: Somerset, England Member No.: 22 Real Name: Grace Writer of: Poetry & Prose |
Hello Dolly
I heard you were dead; knew rumors couldn't be true; music will ne'er die What alovely sentiment here iridescent dragonfly a blue speck on the rushes- twinkle in God’s eye Grace
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Grace http://mysite.orange.co.uk/graceingreece Life is not measured by the number of breaths we take, but by the moments that take our breath away. Nominate a tile for the Crown Jewels and Faery Awards today! For details, go to the Valley of the Kings! MM Award Winner |
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Mar 12 04, 04:08
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Open night sky floats
and is bleached haphazardly in streaks; the sun rises. |
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Mar 13 04, 03:09
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Egyptian Posts: 427 Joined: 5-August 03 From: Oregon, USA Member No.: 8 Real Name: Dolly Writer of: Poetry |
Shopping for our needs brings back fond mem'rys; remember pennies? © D R Harris - 12 March 2004 |
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Mar 14 04, 03:25
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Ornate Oracle Posts: 3,660 Joined: 23-August 03 From: Somerset, England Member No.: 22 Real Name: Grace Writer of: Poetry & Prose |
into the limelight; enthusiastic stampede small ballerinas! Grace ······· ······· Love
Grace http://mysite.orange.co.uk/graceingreece Life is not measured by the number of breaths we take, but by the moments that take our breath away. Nominate a tile for the Crown Jewels and Faery Awards today! For details, go to the Valley of the Kings! MM Award Winner |
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Mar 14 04, 03:28
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Ornate Oracle Posts: 3,660 Joined: 23-August 03 From: Somerset, England Member No.: 22 Real Name: Grace Writer of: Poetry & Prose |
Hi Dolly
may shadows never darken the joy in your heart everlasting love Love and all my best wishes Grace ······· ······· Love
Grace http://mysite.orange.co.uk/graceingreece Life is not measured by the number of breaths we take, but by the moments that take our breath away. Nominate a tile for the Crown Jewels and Faery Awards today! For details, go to the Valley of the Kings! MM Award Winner |
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Mar 14 04, 03:35
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Dear Grace,
I know this is not interactice, but inspiration knows no bounds : Small ballerinas locking horns, grow up moody : prima donna cows ! Alan McAlpine Douglas |
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Mar 14 04, 17:31
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Egyptian Posts: 427 Joined: 5-August 03 From: Oregon, USA Member No.: 8 Real Name: Dolly Writer of: Poetry |
Thank you so much, Lady Grace! What a neat haiku! Yessss ... everlasting love.
Everlasting love; if love can last forever we'll make it happen © D R Harris - 14 March 2004 Yes, yes, I know this isn't the interactive thread, but I simply HAD to do it!:sun: |
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