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 Jan 27 04, 19:55
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 Mosaic Master  Posts: 18,892 Joined: 1-August 03 From: Massachusetts Member No.: 2 Real Name: Lori Kanter Writer of: Poetry & Prose Referred By:Imhotep  |
You two are going strong!
  Grace - have a fish!  or two  Daniel - sunshine! :sun: :sun: I'll be back when migraine vacates my head.... HUGS! Cleo :troy: ·······  ·······"It's a dangerous business, Frodo, going out your door. You step into the Road, and if you don't keep your feet, there is no knowing where you might be swept off to." ~ J.R.R Tolkien, The Lord of the Rings
Collaboration feeds innovation. In the spirit of workshopping, please revisit those threads you've critiqued to see if the author has incorporated your ideas, or requests further feedback from you. In addition, reciprocate with those who've responded to you in kind. "I believe it is the act of remembrance, long after our bones have turned to dust, to be the true essence of an afterlife." ~ Lorraine M. Kanter Nominate a poem for the InterBoard Poetry Competition by taking into careful consideration those poems you feel would best represent Mosaic Musings. For details, click into the IBPC nomination forum. Did that poem just captivate you? Nominate it for the Faery award today! If perfection of form allured your muse, propose the Crown Jewels award. For more information, click here!  "Worry looks around, Sorry looks back, Faith looks up." ~ Early detection can save your life.MM Award Winner           |
  
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Jan 28 04, 03:41
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 Ornate Oracle  Posts: 3,660 Joined: 23-August 03 From: Somerset, England Member No.: 22 Real Name: Grace Writer of: Poetry & Prose |
Hello Cleo,
Hope the migraine clears up quickly.  Thank you for the fish I now have five  I'll need a bigger aquarium soon!I see I placed a haiku in here by mistake. I shall move it now - my apologies, still not thinking straight. Morning Dew dewdrops cling like jewels suspended from the web of a spider on the sundial then.. melt Love Grace ······· ······· Love
Grace  http://mysite.orange.co.uk/graceingreece Life is not measured by the number of breaths we take, but by the moments that take our breath away. Nominate a tile for the Crown Jewels and Faery Awards today! For details, go to the Valley of the Kings! MM Award Winner      |
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Jan 28 04, 03:58
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 Egyptian Posts: 427 Joined: 5-August 03 From: Oregon, USA Member No.: 8 Real Name: Dolly Writer of: Poetry |
Voting, which choice we make, will provide guide for us in days to come, considering if country will be free for all or not. © D. R. Harris - 27 Jan 2004 |
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Jan 29 04, 02:31
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Ornate Oracle Posts: 3,660 Joined: 23-August 03 From: Somerset, England Member No.: 22 Real Name: Grace Writer of: Poetry & Prose |
Never alone on waking my sad fingers trace your likeness my love knowing that solitude was not for you Love Grace ······· ······· Love
Grace http://mysite.orange.co.uk/graceingreece Life is not measured by the number of breaths we take, but by the moments that take our breath away. Nominate a tile for the Crown Jewels and Faery Awards today! For details, go to the Valley of the Kings! MM Award Winner |
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Jan 30 04, 20:30
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Overused Movie Scene
Starter won't turn over as we nervously sit, stranded with my leg touching your bare knee. |
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Jan 31 04, 03:25
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Egyptian Posts: 427 Joined: 5-August 03 From: Oregon, USA Member No.: 8 Real Name: Dolly Writer of: Poetry |
Hi Jessica,
I enjoyed reading your fine cinquain! Thinking about the meaning tells me the situation could be chilly and warm depending on where you live, of course.  Good work! Blessings, Dolly :pharoah: |
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Feb 4 04, 20:24
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Egyptian Posts: 427 Joined: 5-August 03 From: Oregon, USA Member No.: 8 Real Name: Dolly Writer of: Poetry |
Sometimes things can happen to make differences.. that began the day I met you, my love. © D R Harris - 4 February 2004 All rights reserved as an unpublished work. |
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Feb 5 04, 03:45
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Ornate Oracle Posts: 3,660 Joined: 23-August 03 From: Somerset, England Member No.: 22 Real Name: Grace Writer of: Poetry & Prose |
Hello Dove,
Overused Movie Scene QUOTE Starter won't turn over as we nervously sit, stranded with my leg touching your bare knee. Very graphic Dove, takes me back to my youth - sigh :sun: Love Grace ······· ······· Love
Grace http://mysite.orange.co.uk/graceingreece Life is not measured by the number of breaths we take, but by the moments that take our breath away. Nominate a tile for the Crown Jewels and Faery Awards today! For details, go to the Valley of the Kings! MM Award Winner |
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Feb 5 04, 03:54
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Ornate Oracle Posts: 3,660 Joined: 23-August 03 From: Somerset, England Member No.: 22 Real Name: Grace Writer of: Poetry & Prose |
Hello Dolly,
Life's Changes QUOTE Sometimes things can happen to make differences.. that began the day I met you, my love. I empathise with this piece entirely Dolly. I also was thinking along the lines of changes: The Photograph candles light up your face animating your smile. Remembering your gentle touch I cry Daylight your soul mirrored brightly beside my reflection, burnishing this winter morning I smile Love Grace ······· ······· Love
Grace http://mysite.orange.co.uk/graceingreece Life is not measured by the number of breaths we take, but by the moments that take our breath away. Nominate a tile for the Crown Jewels and Faery Awards today! For details, go to the Valley of the Kings! MM Award Winner |
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Feb 18 04, 03:23
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Ornate Oracle Posts: 3,660 Joined: 23-August 03 From: Somerset, England Member No.: 22 Real Name: Grace Writer of: Poetry & Prose |
Alone silence overwhelming all sound, clutches my heart searing the scar left by your absence Grace ······· ······· Love
Grace http://mysite.orange.co.uk/graceingreece Life is not measured by the number of breaths we take, but by the moments that take our breath away. Nominate a tile for the Crown Jewels and Faery Awards today! For details, go to the Valley of the Kings! MM Award Winner |
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Feb 18 04, 03:32
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Egyptian Posts: 427 Joined: 5-August 03 From: Oregon, USA Member No.: 8 Real Name: Dolly Writer of: Poetry |
Ohhhhh Grace,
This beautiful cinquain tears at my heart bringing peculiar little droplets of salty liquid leaking from my eyes. You write with such visual graces, Lady Grace. I'm so sorry for the loss of both our loved ones ... it hurts like the dickens and leaves a gaping void where once they danced. Blessings to you, dear one, :cloud9 Dolly 
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Feb 18 04, 04:02
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Ornate Oracle Posts: 3,660 Joined: 23-August 03 From: Somerset, England Member No.: 22 Real Name: Grace Writer of: Poetry & Prose |
Hello Dolly,
I'm glad this touched you. It does help just a little to try to express the loss and if at the same time it moves others I am delighted. While we remember them, they never die. Love Grace 
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Grace http://mysite.orange.co.uk/graceingreece Life is not measured by the number of breaths we take, but by the moments that take our breath away. Nominate a tile for the Crown Jewels and Faery Awards today! For details, go to the Valley of the Kings! MM Award Winner |
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Feb 20 04, 02:11
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Egyptian Posts: 427 Joined: 5-August 03 From: Oregon, USA Member No.: 8 Real Name: Dolly Writer of: Poetry |
I sit contemplating returning to your arms wondering if 'twill all be soon hurry © D R Harris - 19 February 2004 |
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Feb 22 04, 03:06
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Egyptian Posts: 427 Joined: 5-August 03 From: Oregon, USA Member No.: 8 Real Name: Dolly Writer of: Poetry |
Wowww your Ladyship, you're a tough act to follow! These cinquains are so dreamily lovely ..your gentle words touch me like cool fingers on fevered brow .. soothing.
You sure have a gift, Grace, Hugs, Dolly 
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Feb 22 04, 04:04
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Egyptian Posts: 427 Joined: 5-August 03 From: Oregon, USA Member No.: 8 Real Name: Dolly Writer of: Poetry |
A key is what I seek; to see into your soul and learn the wheres and whys of you my sweet. © D R Harris - 19 February 2004 |
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Mar 12 04, 04:37
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First Person Interview
Woman: freckle speckled, a rollercoaster ride of various dyed hair moments and emotions. i wasn't sure about the colon. |
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Mar 13 04, 06:02
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Egyptian Posts: 427 Joined: 5-August 03 From: Oregon, USA Member No.: 8 Real Name: Dolly Writer of: Poetry |
Very well done, Jessica! .......... and what an interesting picture you paint of an equally interesting woman! Wonderfully achieved!
Let's see what I can come up with, Blessings, Dolly |
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Mar 13 04, 06:10
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Egyptian Posts: 427 Joined: 5-August 03 From: Oregon, USA Member No.: 8 Real Name: Dolly Writer of: Poetry |
She's high on life and love, leaving sorrow behind; she's reaching out for better days ahead © D R Harris - 11 March 2004 |
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Mar 16 04, 19:27
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Arch de Color Cloudy, few sunshowers, gentle breeze cools the day, puddles drying, kids back at play, summer. Ice cream, chocolate cone, ice tea and lemonade, pot o' gold waits at the bottom, rainbow. |
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Mar 17 04, 01:57
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Dear Larry,
Like ! Inspired me to write yours somewhat backwards - using your first and last words, inverted, as my last and first : IN VERSION Summer clemently comes, and will dry us all out; damn showery April, inclemently cloudy. Rainbow consolation perhaps for wrecked picnic ? "Be still" they all say, but soaked, hungry, still I scream ! Alan McAlpine Douglas |
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