Hello, Steve,
Lamentable heart <<<<<5
wounded by sorrow’s arrow,<<<<<7
here lies bleeding love. <<<<<5 Bleed-ing I think 5 silly bulls. There is also [bleeding] (one word) as a slang 'swear word'. Well, I'm not so sure?
I think the last line shows emotion.
Dunno about the 'here lies' bit though.
A sorrowful heart: pierced by an arrow.
(lamentable and sorrow: mean the same thing by the way)
Maybe think about changing the last line to create a poetical flavour to compliment the first two lines.
Never the less, I enjoyed the read.
John