Group: Praetorian
Posts: 4,599
Joined: 4-August 03
From: Birmingham, England
Member No.: 12
Real Name: Eira Needham
Writer of: Poetry
Referred By:Lori
This is a clever idea Terence and I like the 'ping' sound at the end of the rain shower.
spring rain- the gradual stop...ping
Perhaps rather than mention spring, think of an aspect of spring that hints at the season.
Nice one
Snow
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Live one day at a time -it's simpler that way. Laugh loud & often - it's medicinal. Write from the heart - it's therapeutic. Beauty comes from within - the outer is just skin!
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