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Terocon101
post Nov 10 07, 05:57
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spring rain-
the gradual
stop...ping






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post Jan 10 08, 05:23
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This is a clever idea Terence and I like the 'ping' sound at the end of the rain shower.


spring rain-
the gradual
stop...ping



Perhaps rather than mention spring, think of an aspect of spring that hints at the season.

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