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Mosaic Musings...interactive poetry reviews _ ARCHIVES -> Chapbook Competitions _ Interchange

Posted by: JLY Nov 15 08, 07:13




INTERCHANGE

My past behavior was murky,
a once skewed view of life
had been a futile paradigm,
engaged only to evoke strife.

This heart had grown cold,
I soon embraced darkness
and it was a weighty anchor
mired with heavy bitterness.

A pawn to caustic devices,
I was amuck in hollow dreams
that offered glaring apparitions
to swift, harrowing extremes.

Immortality was not my desire,
I’d fallen, sedated by despair
and dwarfed by futility’s trash
while lying in a stupefied lair.

Introspection rallied my spirit,
finally I took a solemn pledge
to escape my decadent habits;
my principles I would not hedge.

Intervention enlightened a vista
once lost in an addictive state,
now framed by blessed beliefs,
a genesis I long to celebrate.

Gossamer chords of serenity
resonate melodically in my mind,
a peaceful haven inspires my soul
as hope and faith are entwined.

Posted by: Cleo_Serapis Nov 15 08, 07:45

Thank you for your entry into Odin's Opposition! troy.gif

Perhaps you'll rise up, drink from the Well of Wisdom and be crowned the 'bringer of victory'? cali.gif

Best of luck in the battle! vic.gif

~Mosaic Musings Staff knight.gif

Posted by: Cleo_Serapis Sep 10 09, 19:10

Congratulations John on your Merit placement! dance.gif

You have risen up, drank from the Well of Wisdom and have been crowned the ‘bringer of victory’! rose.gif champagne.gif

Well done!
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Posted by: ohsteve Sep 11 09, 19:22

John, Congratulations on getting a merit for your Odin entry. Well done.

Steve

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