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JustDaniel
post Apr 9 12, 08:08
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work

requires

focus-time

but don't forget

fun


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Larry
post Apr 9 12, 09:57
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Hot
Summers
contravene,
like tails wagging
dogs.


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post Apr 9 12, 10:20
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thwart

the heat

with a fan;

see the dog's tail

wag



© MLee Dickens'son 2012


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post Apr 10 12, 02:01
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By way of acknowledging Will.I.Am of the Hot Chilli Pepper's creative use of his forename :

Dan.
I.El
lights lanturnes
at drop of hat
bright

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post Apr 10 12, 11:44
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hats

cover

ideas

that need the light

share


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post Apr 10 12, 13:42
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Share
old words
with others,
rearranged by
thoughts.


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post Apr 10 12, 13:48
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thoughts
through mind
mined meanings
leanings revealed
mind !

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Larry
post Apr 10 12, 13:56
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Mind
and heart
understand
what lips never
say.


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post Apr 10 12, 14:01
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TRUTH

say
what's dared/
what is true/
gotten away
with

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JustDaniel
post Apr 10 12, 14:14
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Just a reminder, from the opening page of this thread, re 'lanturne':

QUOTE
Generally, each line is a self-contained statement, such that the poem is not merely a sentence arbitrarily divided into syllables. Some suggest that the form should begin with a noun, with line 2 giving an action or description of the noun and lines 3 & 4 each giving a further description, and the 5th line offering another word for the noun, though not necessarily a synonym or even a noun. The form may or may not have a title, but it can be an integral part as the ‘sixth line’ of the poem.


snuffed lanturne


bard

hanging

strung out words

a death sentence

choked



© MLee Dickens'son 2012


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post Apr 16 12, 16:29
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choked
strong words
emotions
hung out to dry
iced

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post Apr 16 12, 22:52
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brood

ice-teased

with steeped words

the poet's thoughts

pour



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post Apr 17 12, 08:51
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pores
exhude
cool bodies
waist removal
sweat


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post Apr 17 12, 15:46
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sweat
can pour
from forehead
concentration
'spired

Alan


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post Apr 18 12, 08:41
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spires
reach up
touching hearts
iconic aim
point


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post Apr 18 12, 10:32
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point
at sky
fluffy clouds
followed by rain
see ?

Alan


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post Apr 18 12, 13:39
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sea

whispers

good morning

announcing hi

tide


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post Apr 19 12, 03:08
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tied
fessled
imprisoned
done up in knots
dyed


or


tried
in car
serrated
metal prison
cell

Alan


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post Apr 19 12, 13:54
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Sell
your lure
telephone
applications
cost

or

dyed
in wool
sheep's clothing
do not fit wolf's
bane


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When power leads man toward arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the areas of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of his existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.
John Fitzgerald Kennedy



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post Apr 19 12, 14:21
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bay
a moon
optimism
with girl on arm
wolf

Alan


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