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heartsong7
post Sep 26 04, 12:23
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Autumn ....Rhyme-ku series

Days are clear and bright
skies turquoise and lapis blue
clouds fluffy and white.

Cold, crisp starry night
vibrant colors paint the view
honking geese take to flight

Autumn’s at it’s height
critters scurry right on cue
cozy homes are tight.

Each day brings less light
mornings’ wet with frosty dew
winter sneaks in sight

by Susan Eckenrode


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Cleo_Serapis
post Oct 6 04, 21:20
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Lovely Sue!

I like the rhyme-ku of yours!

Well done and scenefully cool! cool.gif

~Cleo laugh.gif


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