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Cleo_Serapis
post Jan 27 04, 17:12
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This one is my Robert Frost challenge reply (from the Acropolis challenge)  :)

Undergrowth of Uncertainty

Kismet comes to wash
the steps
of ethereal forces
bent in the undergrowth
of uncertainty.

Journeys of jocular
interludes of the
great harvest
flourish.

Had that soil found
its cornucopia where
the sun surfaces
primal prosperity?

Had that flower found
its wealth where the
woods are lovely and
the shade of trees

soothe?

A small bird flew to
the garden of life to
drink of its nourishment.

Others came and went,
giving and receiving
seasonal bounty.

As one luminary clock
calculates cycle's
completion, nothing
gold can stay
, for
its time is measured.

Some say the world
discounts Nature’s
fortunes. I disagree.

©2004 Lorraine M Kanter
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An excellent response to any challege.............

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QUOTE (Jim AKA Rapid-Fire @ Sep. 08 2004, 17:37)
An excellent response to any challege.............

WRITE ON!!

Thanks so much Jim!

~Cleo lovie.gif


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"It's a dangerous business, Frodo, going out your door. You step into the Road, and if you don't keep your feet, there is no knowing where you might be swept off to." ~ J.R.R Tolkien, The Lord of the Rings

Collaboration feeds innovation. In the spirit of workshopping, please revisit those threads you've critiqued to see if the author has incorporated your ideas, or requests further feedback from you. In addition, reciprocate with those who've responded to you in kind.

"I believe it is the act of remembrance, long after our bones have turned to dust, to be the true essence of an afterlife." ~ Lorraine M. Kanter

Nominate a poem for the InterBoard Poetry Competition by taking into careful consideration those poems you feel would best represent Mosaic Musings. For details, click into the IBPC nomination forum. Did that poem just captivate you? Nominate it for the Faery award today! If perfection of form allured your muse, propose the Crown Jewels award. For more information, click here!

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Anytime my friend  :pharoah2


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