Out Of View ~ Revised 8/18/07, Free Verse |
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AMETHYST Out Of View ~ Revised 8/18/07 Aug 17 07, 22:15
Mistral Dear Liz, This is so damn cute and I thoroughly en... Aug 17 07, 23:30 AMETHYST QUOTE (Mistral @ Aug 18 07, 00:30 ) 10108... Aug 18 07, 08:56 Merlin Hi Liz, Leonard Cohen is a favorite contemporary.... Aug 18 07, 09:11 AMETHYST QUOTE (Merlin @ Aug 18 07, 10:11 ) 101088... Aug 18 07, 18:49 Merlin Here's the song, Liz. You'll prolly recog... Aug 19 07, 16:31 AMETHYST QUOTE (Merlin @ Aug 19 07, 17:31 ) 101155... Aug 21 07, 09:43 Cleo_Serapis Hi Liz, What a fascinating start - I like the cha... Aug 19 07, 18:50 AMETHYST Hey Lori, Thank you for the strong comments and ... Aug 21 07, 09:48 Peterpan Hi Liz~ I have not read all the comments and sugg... Aug 21 07, 10:18 AMETHYST Dear Beverly, Don, Sylvia and Sue ... Please for... Aug 29 07, 08:16 Don "topped" seems better moved to next line... Aug 21 07, 10:30 Psyche Hi Liz! Love this one! Since you've al... Aug 21 07, 20:55 heartsong7 Oh wow Liz, what imagery! Your words tell a st... Aug 24 07, 17:54 bbnixon Hi Liz, This is so wonderful, I love the way it j... Aug 31 07, 12:43 AMETHYST QUOTE (bbnixon @ Aug 31 07, 13:43 ) 10182... Sep 1 07, 12:32 Eisa Hi Liz I agree with the last comment -- no nits o... Sep 1 07, 05:16 AMETHYST Hey Snow, Thank you so much for the nomination a... Sep 2 07, 09:48 Judi ~~~~~2nd Revision~~~~~~~~~~~ Out Of View - I re... Sep 1 07, 18:18 AMETHYST Thank you Judi, You got it Judi! A period sh... Sep 2 07, 09:43 Peggy Carpenter Harwood Hi Amethyst, I think this is an interesting poem... Sep 3 07, 10:16 AMETHYST QUOTE (Peggy Carpenter Harwood @ Sep 3 07, 11... Sep 3 07, 16:30 JustDaniel Greetings, Liz. I still don't understand line... Sep 3 07, 11:20 1 User(s) are reading this topic (1 Guests and 0 Anonymous Users)
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