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Alan
post Mar 2 15, 14:38
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arseless

this is matchless fun :
soaking Dad with mush snowballs
and laughing arse off

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post Mar 2 15, 17:10
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Note, please: many of our entries of late have been far off the mark of faux-ku:

1 Title to be play on words itself
2 BOTH sections of the ku must contain a play on words



bale-out

ass' laugh-off
makes a donkey of himself;
fails Hee-Haw role call


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Larry
post Mar 3 15, 00:42
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a maize zing

Hee-Haw roll call fails
without Grand-pa's load of corn
the show can't suck seed




Any better Daniel?


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post Mar 3 15, 11:39
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false adage

the show can suck; see
what I have been telling you
it must not go on

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post Mar 3 15, 11:54
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don't blow it

must snot go on
dripping down my nose?
make tissue of it


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post Mar 3 15, 15:59
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delicate matters

a tissue napkin
is quite insubstantial
best snot avoided

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post Mar 4 15, 10:29
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stand-up unstuffed

best snot voided
by one with dry humors;
often buggers it


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post Mar 4 15, 11:23
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Soft Landing

debugging software
is pain in proverbial
recommend tissue

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post Mar 4 15, 17:19
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the 'ruler' measures

wreck 'o mended
unentitled faux-ku:
words want to play


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post Mar 4 15, 18:17
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buried meanings

words don't want to play
desire to not show faces
a too grave error

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post Mar 5 15, 23:11
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taken for granite

two in grave errors
the gambler was found cheating
a worthless marker


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post Mar 6 15, 06:25
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underground revealed

too-grave error:
masochists' bodies
became switched


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post Mar 6 15, 23:40
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no bare bear insight

a twitch and bees came
attacking the bear who ran
but not fur enough


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post Mar 8 15, 02:21
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post-hibernation

he has fur enough
for an extremely long trip
goes head over heels

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post Mar 8 15, 23:32
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headed for ewe

goats head heals over
after battling the ram
now he's not horny


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post Mar 9 15, 02:31
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whether

now it's not hoary
but the weatherman predicts
the iceman cometh

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post Mar 11 15, 23:20
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u follow g

I. C. E. man came
let female aliens go
saw sirs as flight risk


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post Mar 13 15, 16:57
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weighty responsibility

a sister helpless
with poor-dieting sibling;
failed him a gain


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post Mar 15 15, 14:01
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tongue tide

she flailed him again;
and rode that cheeky weapon,
serf-ing waves of words


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post Mar 17 15, 17:10
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book bombed

surfing waves of words
it's more filler than thriller
not like nuclear text

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