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> Adonis in Dreamscape --First Revision ~~tweaked
azurepoetry
post Mar 26 07, 03:30
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Cleo,

My absolute apologies on my tardy reply. Since time has expired, I will send a permission e-mail for next month if that is an option. I have had my time absorbed outside of the virtual world.

Silhouetting is a great suggestion. Intone I will have to consider, since meadowlarks actually sing warning songs to other possible intruders (esp. other meadowlarks, when mating is intended).

Thanks you again for your kind comments and suggestions, I promise to try and come to a concluding version on this poem. I have just written one poem, between this and now...if that tells you my loss for creation. On the other hand, reading has been my best friend.

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post Mar 30 07, 05:29
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Hi Tim.

Yes, please DO send me back the permission PM when you can so I can add it in for the May nominations.

I look forward to seeing if you use 'Silhouetting' as an option as I think it will add a bit more movement in that line visually.

I hope your muse treats you kindly this month!

Cheers
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