Hi Wally!
What a lovely sonnet!
I enjoyed this very much and am glad to read your beautiful poetry again!
I just have a few li'l nits for you to T or T below.
At times I crave the restless sea,
*Perhaps change the comma to an ellipse*at times deep forests make me whole;
dry desert plains can set me free
while mountain cascades rest my soul.
*I love 'rest my soul here. Would you also consider 'soothe my soul' for alliteration?*Today, great rivers hold my mind
and bush-veld nights my passions bend;
*Here, I would add a comma after nights, and an apostrophe in passion's* tomorrow, sunset lakes shall find
tranquillity life can't transcend.
* Not sure if typo due to English variation?*The road is long, the journey hard
each trail beset with peril and greed
It’s well to always be on guard
yet keep in sight one's humble creed.
Each special spot upon God's Earth
is place for souls to share re-birth.
I love the closing couplet and offer a suggestion: add comma at end of Earth and change 'is' to 'our'.Enjoyed the read!
~Cleo