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 Feb 20 04, 04:11
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 Egyptian  Posts: 427 Joined: 5-August 03 From: Oregon, USA Member No.: 8 Real Name: Dolly Writer of: Poetry  |
I sit contemplating returning to your arms wondering how soon it will be; hurry ... © D R Harris - 19 February 2004 |
  
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Feb 20 04, 05:29
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 Creative Chieftain  Posts: 2,587 Joined: 9-August 03 From: Australia Member No.: 17 Real Name: John Writer of: Poetry |
Good day?
Ah, a picturesque cinquain, amazing how a small stanza can have an effect of grandeur.  I hope it was worth the wait. :) :wizard: Arnie  :troy:
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Feb 20 04, 05:32
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Egyptian Posts: 427 Joined: 5-August 03 From: Oregon, USA Member No.: 8 Real Name: Dolly Writer of: Poetry |
Hi Arnie,
He's definitely worth the wait!  Thanks for your encouraging words, so appreciated. Always trying to learn, Dolly 
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Feb 20 04, 19:42
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 Laureate Legionnaire Posts: 1,250 Joined: 2-August 03 From: USA Member No.: 7 Writer of: Poetry |
QUOTE(Athena @ Feb. 20 2004, 03:11) I sit contemplating returning to your arms wondering how soon it will be hurry © D R Harris - 19 February 2004 Hello Dolly~ You have me wanting to write a cinquain. (haven't in a long while) In your brevity, you bring passionate imagery with a strong ending. I love the title too as it sets the stage well.  An excellent cinquain, indeed! :pharoah2 :pharoah2 Blessings~ Lindi ······· ·······"Imagination is more important than knowledge and encircles the world"
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Feb 21 04, 03:27
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Egyptian Posts: 427 Joined: 5-August 03 From: Oregon, USA Member No.: 8 Real Name: Dolly Writer of: Poetry |
QUOTE(Aphrodite @ Feb. 20 2004, 16:42) QUOTE(Athena @ Feb. 20 2004, 03:11) I sit contemplating returning to your arms wondering how soon it will be hurry © D R Harris - 19 February 2004 Hello Dolly~ You have me wanting to write a cinquain. (haven't in a long while) In your brevity, you bring passionate imagery with a strong ending. I love the title too as it sets the stage well. An excellent cinquain, indeed! :pharoah2 :pharoah2 Blessings~ Lindi Hi Lindi. Thank you so very much for your always welcome and encouraging comments! Yes, why not write a cinquain? We have the interactive thread and the regular thread or post one in the crit threads or all of the above!  :laugh: :dance: Why not? I'll sure rush to read!  Hugs, Dolly :pharoah: |
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Feb 21 04, 16:46
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Dolly, nice one--
Know what you mean   Gerry. |
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Mar 1 04, 05:08
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Egyptian Posts: 427 Joined: 5-August 03 From: Oregon, USA Member No.: 8 Real Name: Dolly Writer of: Poetry |
QUOTE(codger @ Feb. 21 2004, 13:46) Dolly, nice one-- Know what you mean Gerry. Thank you, Gerry. It's nice to be understood and reach empathetic hearts. Dolly |
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