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Aug 15 22, 06:13
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must make decision about whether I should rhyme like circumcision could remove a lot of slime yet it oft takes too much time
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Aug 15 22, 15:49
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It takes too much time when he’s getting his hair done and it feels sublime but the comb out is not fun. He will dry It in the sun.
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Aug 18 22, 08:01
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drying in the sun drudgery for a raisin being grape is fun hanging around amazin' but here on rack, it's blazin'
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Aug 18 22, 14:34
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It’s blazing on rack so I lowered the grill’s heat; flipped ribs on their back and finished my weekend treat. No one likes overcooked meat.
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Aug 19 22, 03:39
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Overcooked meat sucks at your summertime cookout 'cause it costs big bucks Guilty chef had best look out for homeowner if he's stout
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Aug 19 22, 14:06
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A stout homeowner might consider losing weight if he’s a loner. I’ve heard that one diet’s great; serve food on a smaller plate.
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Aug 19 22, 23:45
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When your plate's smaller you'll tend to eat much less food Your wife won't holler that your piggishness is rude... and every bit will be chewed
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Aug 20 22, 10:46
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Each bit will be chewed at least twenty times or more. Digestion ensued! For nutrition starts before your food hits the stomach’s floor
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Aug 21 22, 07:36
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Stomached food hit floor having not been digested When I asked for more she brought what I requested... but then I got congested
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Aug 21 22, 10:20
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I got congested with the pollen and the rain so I got tested and found my cold was just plain; not another COVID strain.
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Aug 22 22, 02:35
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Covid causes strain when we have to wear a mask The whole thing's a pain but a necessary task I'll let you peek if you ask
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Aug 22 22, 17:01
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If you ask to peek do you want to see my face or just hear me speak? Of COVID, there’s not a trace but that is only God’s grace.
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Aug 24 22, 04:32
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It's only by grace that each of us is alive. We try to keep pace with our surroundings to thrive for we live, not just survive
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Aug 24 22, 15:19
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We survive to live every moment of each day so don’t take, just give Him thanks whenever you pray; it keeps the Devil at bay
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Aug 25 22, 06:13
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Speaking of that, Larry, would you please read this sonnet I wrote earlier this morning: https://allpoetry.com/poem/16703510-Inciden...MLee-DickenssonKeep Satan at bay with praise always on your tongue Bless the Lord, you'll say... the words you'll have loudly sung while to His Word you'll have clung
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Aug 26 22, 20:45
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You cling to His Word feeling prayer is not enough but you know He heard and although your road is rough, each trouble fades in a puff
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Aug 28 22, 03:25
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our fading trouble can be written in rondeau and truth with bubble to the surface from below our contest isn't for show
(and it's been posted on AP!)
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Aug 30 22, 15:18
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Our contest for show and tell is at your behest for all entrants know it’s much better than the rest in teaching what we know best.
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Aug 30 22, 15:28
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They want what you know because you've shown that you care plus write like a pro They've one more week to compare notes to demonstrate their flair
Please give me your ratings a week from today (Tuesday), and we can discuss next Tuesday night... before our final decision next Wednesday!
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Sep 1 22, 23:31
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Demonstrate their flair with some eclectic rondeaux when they wish to share speaks volumes of what they know and how much they want to grow
I shall do that. I have parsed and critiqued all entries. They are looking pretty good.
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