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JustDaniel
post Aug 15 22, 06:13
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must make decision
about whether I should rhyme
like circumcision
could remove a lot of slime
yet it oft takes too much time


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post Aug 15 22, 15:49
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It takes too much time
when he’s getting his hair done
and it feels sublime
but the comb out is not fun.
He will dry It in the sun.


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post Aug 18 22, 08:01
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drying in the sun
drudgery for a raisin
being grape is fun
hanging around amazin'
but here on rack, it's blazin'


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post Aug 18 22, 14:34
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It’s blazing on rack
so I lowered the grill’s heat;
flipped ribs on their back
and finished my weekend treat.
No one likes overcooked meat.


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JustDaniel
post Aug 19 22, 03:39
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Overcooked meat sucks
at your summertime cookout
'cause it costs big bucks
Guilty chef had best look out
for homeowner if he's stout


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post Aug 19 22, 14:06
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A stout homeowner
might consider losing weight
if he’s a loner.
I’ve heard that one diet’s great;
serve food on a smaller plate.


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When power leads man toward arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the areas of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of his existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.
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post Aug 19 22, 23:45
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When your plate's smaller
you'll tend to eat much less food
Your wife won't holler
that your piggishness is rude...
and every bit will be chewed


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post Aug 20 22, 10:46
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Each bit will be chewed
at least twenty times or more.
Digestion ensued!
For nutrition starts before
your food hits the stomach’s floor


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When power leads man toward arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the areas of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of his existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.
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post Aug 21 22, 07:36
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Stomached food hit floor
having not been digested
When I asked for more
she brought what I requested...
but then I got congested


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post Aug 21 22, 10:20
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I got congested
with the pollen and the rain
so I got tested
and found my cold was just plain;
not another COVID strain.


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When power leads man toward arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the areas of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of his existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.
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post Aug 22 22, 02:35
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Covid causes strain
when we have to wear a mask
The whole thing's a pain
but a necessary task
I'll let you peek if you ask


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post Aug 22 22, 17:01
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If you ask to peek
do you want to see my face
or just hear me speak?
Of COVID, there’s not a trace
but that is only God’s grace.


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When power leads man toward arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the areas of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of his existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.
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post Aug 24 22, 04:32
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It's only by grace
that each of us is alive.
We try to keep pace
with our surroundings to thrive
for we live, not just survive


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post Aug 24 22, 15:19
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We survive to live
every moment of each day
so don’t take, just give
Him thanks whenever you pray;
it keeps the Devil at bay


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When power leads man toward arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the areas of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of his existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.
John Fitzgerald Kennedy



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post Aug 25 22, 06:13
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Speaking of that, Larry, would you please read this sonnet I wrote earlier this morning: https://allpoetry.com/poem/16703510-Inciden...MLee-Dickensson


Keep Satan at bay
with praise always on your tongue
Bless the Lord, you'll say...
the words you'll have loudly sung
while to His Word you'll have clung




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post Aug 26 22, 20:45
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You cling to His Word
feeling prayer is not enough
but you know He heard
and although your road is rough,
each trouble fades in a puff


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When power leads man toward arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the areas of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of his existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.
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post Aug 28 22, 03:25
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our fading trouble
can be written in rondeau
and truth with bubble
to the surface from below
our contest isn't for show


(and it's been posted on AP!)


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post Aug 30 22, 15:18
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Our contest for show
and tell is at your behest
for all entrants know
it’s much better than the rest
in teaching what we know best.


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When power leads man toward arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the areas of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of his existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.
John Fitzgerald Kennedy



Kindness is a seed sown by the gentlest hand, growing care's flowers.
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post Aug 30 22, 15:28
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They want what you know
because you've shown that you care
plus write like a pro
They've one more week to compare
notes to demonstrate their flair



Please give me your ratings a week from today (Tuesday), and we can discuss next Tuesday night... before our final decision next Wednesday!


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post Sep 1 22, 23:31
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Demonstrate their flair
with some eclectic rondeaux
when they wish to share
speaks volumes of what they know
and how much they want to grow



I shall do that. I have parsed and critiqued all entries. They are looking pretty good.


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