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Nov 19 19, 04:58
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those who don't like clods get mud inside their sneakers not good for the feet
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Dec 12 19, 00:03
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not good for defeat when you are on the menu; gnus knew the bad news
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Dec 12 19, 03:43
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no gnus if bad news Kenya to Namibia oh, savannah, cry
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Sep 29 22, 09:38
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old Susans in crowds black eyes following the sun butterflies' heaven
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Oct 7 22, 15:47
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butterfly haven amid the honeysuckle color scentsation
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Oct 10 22, 09:10
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color sensations Autumn’s palette on display nature humbles art
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Oct 10 22, 18:24
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nature's crumbled art autumn's once-colorful leaves scattered on trodden footpath
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Oct 11 22, 18:13
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5 - 7 - 7 ???
on trodden footpath autumn’s threads knitting up time winter’s fashion shows
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Oct 19 22, 16:11
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Oh, well! Just delete the first word the way you did in your response!
winter's fashion show freezing rain coats the branches of naked maples
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Oct 19 22, 22:25
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naked maples oft produce the richest syrup there’s no leaves to feed
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Oct 21 22, 16:05
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must know leaves to feed your wife with Caesar salad careful with dressing
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Oct 22 22, 13:02
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careful when dressing, nature chooses her new frock; envy comes in green
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Oct 23 22, 00:02
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a green-frocked envy may bedazzle your ego id will be confused
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Oct 25 22, 21:19
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I. D.’s confusing unless you’re a botanist; tree’s leaves leave a clue
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Oct 26 22, 01:30
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trees leave leafy clues that fall causes them to fall rainbow of colors
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Oct 27 22, 10:58
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colors of rainbows fleeting displays of autumn; eyes are briefly blessed
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Oct 27 22, 12:06
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eyes are blessed by briefs briefly seen while sunbathing had to turn his head
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Nov 5 22, 12:16
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his head had two terns fighting over his straw hat; good cover for chicks
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Nov 5 22, 15:26
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chicks ran for cover after Larry doffed his hat all the straw fell out
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Nov 7 22, 21:16
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all the straw fell out; replaced by soft green grasses, a wren’s spring cleaning
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