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Snowflake ~ Revision 1

Tat lace
of frosty flake
in five-point grace;
a crystal-flocked snowy wake
of wintry white embrace
in frosty-flaked
tatted lace.

Cathy Bollhoefer
copyright Dec 2006


Snowflake ~ Original

Tat lace
of frosty flake
in five-point grace;
a crystal-flocked snowy wake
that winter winds embrace
in frosty-flaked
tatted lace.

Cathy Bollhoefer
copyright Dec 2006


Atarlis Fileata [At’-ar-lee’ Fee-lee-ah’-tay] (Gaelic for "repeating poetic") is a 7-line poem with 2, 3, 4, 5, 4, 3, 2 words per line, and only one rhyme — in the 1st, 3rd, 5th and 7th lines: ABacaBA, the first two lines reversing as the last two lines. (There may be a very slight variation in line 6 and 7, usually only changing one word or rearranging the words already used, but saying basically the same thing.)

There may be any # of stanzas, but each stanza must be able to stand alone.
 
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