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Resilience ~ Revision 3

If I were but a willow tree
in graceful gavotte glide of leaf,
with slender bough of give and take,
a tow'ring trunk of strong belief;

my flesh-born roots would stay their ground.
If I were but a willow tree,
my verdant bands would brandish proud,
as one with nature; flying free.

When fierce skies rage, enrapt winds blow,
in winter whites or summer's reign...
if I were but a willow tree,
the twisting curls of faith sustain.

Though limbs might waver in the wind,
emotions sway to some degree;
my storm-blown spirit would not break,
if I were but a willow tree.

Cathy Bollhoefer
copyright Nov 2005






Resilience ~ Revision 2

If I were but a willow tree
in graceful gavotte glide of leaf,
with slender bough of give and take,
a tow'ring trunk of strong belief;

my deep-bound roots would stand their ground.
If I were but a willow tree,
my verdant bands would brandish proud,
as one with nature; soaring free.

When fierce skies rage, enrapt winds blow,
in winter white or sunlight reign;
if I were but a willow tree...
resilience and faith sustain.

Though limbs may waver in the wind,
might bend and sway to some degree;
my storm-blown spirit would not break,
if I were but a willow tree.

Cathy Bollhoefer
copyright Nov2005




Resilience ~ Quatern (1st Revision)

If I were but a willow tree
with graceful gavotte glide of leaf,
slender bough of give and take,
a tow'ring trunk of strong belief;

my deep-bound roots would stand their ground.
If I were but a willow tree,
my verdant bands would brandish proud,
as one with nature; soaring free.

Though fierce skies rage, enrapt winds blow,
through blizzard fall, or sunlight reign;
if I were but a willow tree,
there'd be no reason to complain.

My limbs would waver in the wind,
I'd bend and sway to some degree;
storm-battered branches would not break,
if I were but a willow tree.

Cathy Bollhoefer
copyright Nov2005



Resilience ~ Quatern (Original)

If I could be a willow tree
with graceful swaying flow of leaf,
slender bough of give and take,
and tow'ring trunk of strong belief;

with deep-bound roots I'd stand my ground.
If I could be a willow tree,
my ribbons green would wave so proud,
as one with nature; yet still free.

The storms could rage and winds might blow,
a blizzard fall, or sun sans rain;
if I were but a willow tree,
I'd have no reason to complain.

My limbs would waver in the wind,
I'd bend and sway, it might hurt me;
from broken vow I would not break,
if I were but a willow tree.

Cathy Bollhoefer
copyright Nov2005
 
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- Cathy   Resilience ~ Revised 8/20/07   Nov 24 05, 08:51
- - Maxim   Hi Cathy I wish I had a well-pool like you seem t...   Nov 24 05, 12:07
- - circumsolar   a graceful work with some striking imagery here, C...   Nov 24 05, 12:26
- - Nina   Hi Cathy I feel the sadness in this poem and the ...   Nov 24 05, 15:17
- - Merlin   Once again, a top-notch posting, Cathy.  I really ...   Nov 24 05, 22:41
- - Cathy   Hi Maxim, I wish I had a well-pool like you seem ...   Nov 24 05, 23:39
- - Cathy   Hi circumsolar, a graceful work with some strikin...   Nov 24 05, 23:43
- - Cathy   Hi Nina, I feel the sadness in this poem and the ...   Nov 24 05, 23:47
- - Cathy   Hi Merlin, Once again, a top-notch posting, Cathy...   Nov 24 05, 23:51
- - circumsolar   Quatern, Latin for “four at a time,” is a 16-line ...   Nov 25 05, 10:56
- - Cathy   Hi circumsolar, Hi Cathy! thanks for posting ...   Nov 25 05, 13:01
- - Cleo_Serapis   Hi Cathy. I am enjoying your Quaterns and am gla...   Nov 27 05, 09:33
- - Cathy   Hi Lori, I am enjoying your Quaterns and am glad ...   Nov 28 05, 08:22
- - MFK_Buckley   Hi Cathy, I'm a newbie here. I have thoroughly...   Nov 29 05, 00:42
- - Cathy   Hi Frances, Welcome to MM! QUOTE Hi Cathy, I...   Nov 29 05, 08:05
- - Cathy   Dusting and polishing~ Any and all comments welco...   Aug 16 07, 07:15
- - AMETHYST   Hi Cathy, First, I have nominated this for IBPC ...   Aug 16 07, 08:38
|- - Cathy   QUOTE (AMETHYST @ Aug 16 07, 09:38 ) 1009...   Aug 17 07, 07:32
- - Nada Lott   Having another go at it, huh Cathy? I think there...   Aug 17 07, 11:13
|- - Cathy   QUOTE (Nada Lott @ Aug 17 07, 12:13 ) 101...   Aug 19 07, 09:12
- - Terocon101   Hi Cathy, Just popping in to say how much I love ...   Aug 17 07, 12:16
|- - Cathy   QUOTE (Terocon101 @ Aug 17 07, 13:16 ) 10...   Aug 19 07, 09:14
- - Cathy   Yet another revision posted~ Thanks for the ideas...   Aug 20 07, 08:10
- - Aggiel   Cathy, Just check in to say, this is lovely poem ...   Aug 30 07, 15:25
- - Cathy   Thank you Aggie! I think those are my favorit...   Sep 4 07, 06:55

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