 The Rose and Weeping Willow, Wizard Award Winner ~ 2nd Revision |
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Cathy The Rose and Weeping Willow Aug 9 05, 15:36 
Nina Hi Cathy
I really love this poem. The imagery is ... Aug 9 05, 16:04 Cathy Hi Nina,
QUOTEI really love this poem. The imager... Aug 9 05, 18:14 Charon Very nice. I have a willow recently planted ... Aug 9 05, 19:45 Cathy Hi Charon,
QUOTEI wish I had written the above li... Aug 9 05, 22:51 Nina *bump* Aug 11 05, 01:25 Don Hi Cathy,
Following is a scansion of first stanza... Aug 11 05, 08:39 Don Hi Cathy,
While thinking on your "odd rhyme" I wa... Aug 11 05, 10:13 Cathy Hi Don,
I knew the first stanza didn't read a... Aug 11 05, 10:33 Don Well my dear Cathy, there isn't any hard rule ... Aug 11 05, 11:06 jgdittier Dear Cathy,
The R&M criteria that appeals to me is... Aug 11 05, 11:31 Cathy Hey Don,
QUOTEWhy do you ask? is a normal questio... Aug 12 05, 00:07 Cathy Hi Ron,
QUOTEDon has mentioned my name as possibl... Aug 12 05, 00:13 Cleo_Serapis Hi Cathy.
Two great items to write about in co... Aug 14 05, 09:13 Cathy Hi Lori,
QUOTETwo great items to write about in c... Aug 14 05, 09:55 Don Cathy,
I like to think of meter, cadence, as like... Aug 14 05, 10:02 Cathy Hi Don,
QUOTEI like to think of meter, cadence, a... Aug 14 05, 10:31 jgdittier Dear Cathy,
My opinion is that your revision effor... Aug 15 05, 07:48 Cathy Hi Ron,
Thanks for stopping in to take a second p... Aug 15 05, 11:59 Don Hi Cathy,
I read Ron's comments and reread to... Aug 15 05, 12:51 Cathy Hi Don,
QUOTEI read Ron's comments and reread... Aug 15 05, 13:31 Don Hi Cathy,
Remember that two heads are better than... Aug 15 05, 13:51 Cathy Well let's hope something rolls down the mount... Aug 15 05, 14:35 Don I'll bring a trowel and horse-hair... Aug 15 05, 14:54 Don Hi Cathy,
For simplified orientation the picture ... Aug 15 05, 15:14 Cathy Hi Don,
QUOTEFor simplified orientation the pictu... Aug 15 05, 15:28 Don The protection given by sad experienced parent (tr... Aug 15 05, 15:37 Cathy I see what you're saying. I'll see w... Aug 15 05, 15:44 Cathy Hey Don!
QUOTEI'll bring a tr... Aug 15 05, 15:46 Don I think the main theme of the final stanza is tyin... Aug 15 05, 17:04 Don Following is a suggested final stanza to prime you... Aug 15 05, 17:27 Cathy Hey Don,
QUOTEFollowing is a suggested final stan... Aug 15 05, 19:19 Cleo_Serapis Excellent revisions Cathy!
~Cleo :pharoah2 Aug 18 05, 19:27 Cathy Thanks Lori! :lovie: Aug 18 05, 19:31 Cleo_Serapis Congrats Cathy on your wizard award winning tile! ... Aug 21 05, 10:42 Jox Well done Cathy on your new Wizard!
Many cong... Aug 21 05, 10:45 Nina Hi Cathy
Well done on your Wizard Award for this ... Aug 21 05, 11:08 Don Congratulations on well earned Wizard Award.
Don Aug 21 05, 11:21 
Cathy Thank you Don, Nina, James and Lori! :la... Aug 21 05, 17:06 1 User(s) are reading this topic (1 Guests and 0 Anonymous Users)
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