4th revision
I awake...equate Hyacynth knifes through thin snow must be spring time now.
3rd Revison
I awake...equate lily heads wave above thin snow must be spring time now.
2nd revision
I awake...equate lilies grow in thin snow; they spring forth in Spring.
Revised
I awake...equate flowers grow a thin snow; must be spring now.
Original
I awake, equate flower grows from white snow bank must be spring time now.
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