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 Assyrian  Posts: 256 Joined: 2-November 15 From: Croydon, Surrey Member No.: 5,284 Real Name: Antony Glaser Writer of: Poetry Referred By:Eira Rhaposdy  |
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Whilst waiting at the station, I feel the cold seep through my coat, my shoes equally follow. Yet for all of this we live in a palace where beyond our comforts the joy of a kind voice is as reawakening as the bird song, our garden with Hellebores compliments this wonderment. Who needs bells and whistles? they only compact bearing. The firmament our kingdom, faith in nature our beholden. ORGINAL I feel the cold seep through my coat, my shoes equally follow. Yet for all of this we live in a palace where beyond our comforts the joy of a kind voice is as reawakening as the bird song, our garden with Hellebores compliments this wonderment. Who needs bells and whistles? they only compact bearing. The firmament our kingdom, faith in nature our beholden. ·······  ·······Imagination fires the soul, resolution the longing.
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greenwich Hope you are my wings Revision May 25 16, 11:16 
Psyche Hi Antony,
Interesting read. I had to look up Hel... May 26 16, 00:08 greenwich The poem is about appreciating nature
The first l... May 26 16, 10:57 
Psyche Thanks a lot for the explanation, Antony. I still ... May 29 16, 01:02 Eisa I feel the cold seep through my coat,
my shoes equ... May 26 16, 16:31 1 User(s) are reading this topic (1 Guests and 0 Anonymous Users)
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