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Taken by the Sea

Walking along the seashore,
my footsteps make
light impressions
in wet sand.
Behind me,
turning tide erases all traces.

Cool breeze brushes my face;
ruffles curling strands of hair.
Gossamer garments cling,
accentuating body contours.

You’re waiting:
a distant figure,
riding white horses,
cresting waves.

I move towards you:
seduced into deeper water
by unseen currents.

Time slows;
I feel you near.

© Nina 2006

Nina

[Guest_Nina_*]

Hi Sylvia

>S>This is one of your very best ! Love it, and I'm fascinated by the different levels of interpretation you've allowed the reader.

Thank you very much, I'm really chuffed you love it.

>S>I imagine a mythical legend, maybe some maiden lured into the sea by the great Poseidon, or else by some other minor god of the oceans.

cool!  I very much like that interpretation

>S>For once I wasn't stumped by "white horses", I knew they were a kind of wave.

:)

>S>Beautiful imagery, Nina.

thank you again

>S>And now that I re-read the title, I think your poem could also refer to suicide. The girl is in a kind of trance and is walking to her death in the sea, by drowning; but as she's having visions (she could be mentally unbalanced through sorrow), she thinks she's seeing white horses and a distant figure, maybe a lover who died and is beckonning her towards him. Wow, how sad !

Your interpretation is pretty close to what was upermost in my mind when writing the poem

>S>A famous Argentine poet, Alforsina Storni, walked into the sea in this fashion, after a broken love affair. But she even wrote a poem about it first, then did it...     In the last line of her poem, she says "if ...... calls, tell him I went away", or something to that effect.

Really!  I shall have to google and see if I can find the poem in English

Thank you so much for your comments

Nina