Taken by the Sea, Wizard & Faery Award Winner Options

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Taken by the Sea

Walking along the seashore,
my footsteps make
light impressions
in wet sand.
Behind me,
turning tide erases all traces.

Cool breeze brushes my face;
ruffles curling strands of hair.
Gossamer garments cling,
accentuating body contours.

You’re waiting:
a distant figure,
riding white horses,
cresting waves.

I move towards you:
seduced into deeper water
by unseen currents.

Time slows;
I feel you near.

© Nina 2006

Nina

[Guest_Nina_*]

Hi J

>N> Wow! thank you.  I'm reet chuffed   and a bit lost for words (that's a first!

>J>LOL now don't tempt me! :)

rofl

>J>Indeed, as I was mentioning arecently (to you, I think) titles are very important to me and can help or damage the main work. Your main work needs no help - but the title is equally good in its own right - perfectly complementary.

Thank you.  It is often just as hard to decide on a title as to write the poem and I'm really pleased I got there with this title as I was a bit unsure.

>J>Well it hits a chord with me certainly and I'm the one grateful - a great read. Thank YOU.

As a writer, knowing you've hit a chord with the reader is what makes writing worthwhile.

Cheers

Nina