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post Sep 9 04, 20:14
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When the leaves fall,
we retreat indoors,
gone is the sea-scented beach
crashing waves, in their lust of glory.

The sun in a path of gold
lower in the sky,
creating a paradox of light
on the orchard bough.


The distant mountains reach,
all the peaks soar
in the dust and dark
points of glistening white.

Inside, the couch�s perfume
exhales, of a certain scent
evergreens and pine,
a touch of outdoors.

In all it�s devine splendor
the clouds would break,
one more time, the sun
would give its earnest glance.
 
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post Sep 10 04, 11:35
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Hello Zeus,

Lovely scenery! I especially prefer the last two stanzas. "The couch’s perfume exhales" - original! This oil of the season of falls deserves "an earnest glance...one more time." Changes indeed!

David :)
 
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- Zeus�   Changes   Sep 9 04, 20:14
- - Cleo_Serapis   Very pretty Zman! We shall add this one to the S...   Sep 10 04, 05:21
- - Zeus�   Lor, thanks, funny how the coming of autumn puts o...   Sep 13 04, 05:38
- - Zeus�   David, it's that melancholy mood, that we get ...   Sep 13 04, 05:41

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