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| Guest_Andrew_* |
 Jul 23 05, 15:52
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| Guest_Jox_* |
 Jul 26 05, 07:47
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Hi Andrew, Nina, Fran.
>F>I took the description of the father's death to be deliberately ambiguous (but I forgot to say that was one of the things I found impressive - ooops). I agree entirely. I think it was written that way, too. But, seeing as I had to interpret it I plumped for murder / manslaughter. >F>So does that mean I'm sitting on that fence again? err, yes :) J. |
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Andrew deleted at author's request Jul 23 05, 15:52 
Nina Hi Andrew
and a very warm welcome to MM. If... Jul 23 05, 17:00 Andrew Hi Nina,
Wow - thanks! I'm so pleased yo... Jul 23 05, 17:09 Nina Hi Andrew
that's good :grinning:
Well... Jul 23 05, 17:20 Andrew Cheers Nina, :)
Best wishes,
Andrew. Jul 23 05, 18:02 Cleo_Serapis Hello Andrew.
WELCOME TO THE MOSAIC!
I'll be... Jul 24 05, 06:14 Toumai Hi, Andrew
Welcome to MM, hope you'll find it... Jul 26 05, 05:45 Jox Hi Andrew.
From me, too a formal big welcome to M... Jul 26 05, 06:46 Nina Hi Andrew
It is interesting how different readers... Jul 26 05, 07:16 Toumai Hi, all
I took the description of the father... Jul 26 05, 07:38 Arnfinn I thought this was extreamly well written for one ... Jul 27 05, 06:00 Andrew Hello everyone,
Wow. I've been away for a fe... Jul 27 05, 12:25 Toumai Hi, Andrew
Just to be really unhelpful, I've ... Jul 27 05, 13:46 Nina Hi Andrew
I too have only written a few short sto... Jul 27 05, 14:41 Andrew Hi again.
Fran: if by 'any luck' you mean... Jul 27 05, 16:12 Jox Hi Andrew,
Personal rejections are as gold dust -... Jul 27 05, 16:16 Cleo_Serapis Hi Andrew!
I finally had a chance to read your... Aug 13 05, 08:50 ZaoShang This story must be published by now, and I really ... Sep 20 05, 20:30 
Andrew Hi, ZaoShang,
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