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Guest_Billydo_*
post Apr 11 05, 12:20
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slick Mick lighter flick
check chick scope
liquid brown hair
sky high hope
cocoa eyes
sleek sultry thighs
chocolate skin

lick teeth
palm breath
check her vector
touch zip
cruise
wobbly walk
ooze booze
smooth schmooze

dance?
romance a chance?
later maybe worry a curry?
not on your nellie
she'd rather watch telly
snarling lips curled
the last man in the world!
rejected dejected drunk and

ejected
 
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Guest_Nina_*
post Apr 12 05, 17:01
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Hi Mike

I enjoyed your minimalist poem and it reminded memy of my feelings of dread when yet another enebriated man lurched across the dance floor thinking I'd find him irresistable.

I too would like to read some of your darker works when you get your Gold membership and can post in the sanctuary or if they are only slightly dark, when they are posted in here or Hermes.

Nina
 
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