Slick Mick, Disco days Options

[Guest_Billydo_*]

click

slick Mick lighter flick
check chick scope
liquid brown hair
sky high hope
cocoa eyes
sleek sultry thighs
chocolate skin

lick teeth
palm breath
check her vector
touch zip
cruise
wobbly walk
ooze booze
smooth schmooze

dance?
romance a chance?
later maybe worry a curry?
not on your nellie
she'd rather watch telly
snarling lips curled
the last man in the world!
rejected dejected drunk and

ejected

[Guest_Jox_*]

Hi Mike,

I hope you do feel able to post your darker poems when you get your Gold membership... I think some of your poems (brutal minimalism) are very hard to follow but when one does break in the rewards are excellent. In fact, since my poems are hard to follow anyway, I'm thinking of trying to be even more minimalist myself, inspired by your approach.

Many of my poems are about political suppression, death and misery (though not all!) so I can emphasise with your stance there. However, I have not had your losses and I can only sympathise in that respect.

Suggestion: keep a small note book / Dictaphone with you at all times. Don't let those ideas escape back into the ether, even when you are hard at work. Jot them down for future use.

All the best, J.