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post Apr 11 05, 12:20
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slick Mick lighter flick
check chick scope
liquid brown hair
sky high hope
cocoa eyes
sleek sultry thighs
chocolate skin

lick teeth
palm breath
check her vector
touch zip
cruise
wobbly walk
ooze booze
smooth schmooze

dance?
romance a chance?
later maybe worry a curry?
not on your nellie
she'd rather watch telly
snarling lips curled
the last man in the world!
rejected dejected drunk and

ejected
 
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Guest_Billydo_*
post Apr 12 05, 02:29
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Hi Alan

I don't know what "Bouncer" is. Thanks for calling me a writer, you're the first.

What did I do with all the ideas? I think they just leaked away. My best friend and his brother died within a few weeks of each other last summer, both of the same genetic blood clotting illness. We were devastated. Over the last few months the pain has started to dull and I have been waking up with either the image of a poem or the idea of a poem in my mind. I write to see him smile, laugh or gasp, and to honour him.

I have written several poems about the death. Some I might post on the site; others are far too dark.

I've been working like a nutter over the past weeks and, feeling a little low yesterday lunchtime, remembering Mike, I thought to write a death poem, but I remembered our nights in discos in our teens and this poured out. A little exaggeration made it funny. It was written in less than ten minutes.

I am pleased you enjoyed it.

Thanks again.

Cheers

Mike
 
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