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 Apr 11 05, 12:20
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slick Mick lighter flick check chick scope liquid brown hair sky high hope cocoa eyes sleek sultry thighs chocolate skin lick teeth palm breath check her vector touch zip cruise wobbly walk ooze booze smooth schmooze dance? romance a chance? later maybe worry a curry? not on your nellie she'd rather watch telly snarling lips curled the last man in the world! rejected dejected drunk and ejected |
  
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Apr 11 05, 15:39
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Dear Mick,
There is no way to crit this ! A totally unique perspective, again accurately observed, and laid down in a rather minimalist way to complete the picture. Seems to be you've been watching "Bouncer" (Hull Trucking Co), as this treads the same territory. Mind you, theirs took all night ! Loved the last lines. Love Alan PS What DID you do with all these thoughts you must have been having all these years, before you recently became a writer ? |
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Billydo Slick Mick Apr 11 05, 12:20 
Jox Hi Mike,
Can't stop to crit now but just want... Apr 11 05, 12:30 Cybele Good morning Mick,
Love it. Love it! Couldn... Apr 12 05, 02:27 Billydo Hi Alan
I don't know what "Bouncer" is. Than... Apr 12 05, 02:29 Jox Hi Mike,
I hope you do feel able to post your dar... Apr 12 05, 02:41 Billydo Hi Grace
Thank you. I'm pleased you enjoyed. ... Apr 12 05, 02:48 Billydo James, I don't know what to say except thanks,... Apr 12 05, 03:00 Toumai Hi Mike,
This really brought back ... Apr 12 05, 03:45 Dear Mike,
"Bouncers" is a very funny play in whi... Apr 12 05, 03:59 Billydo Hi Fran
I'm glad you enjoyed the poem. As to ... Apr 12 05, 05:09 Don Hi Billydo,
A canter into canteen to dunk a dram... Apr 12 05, 08:13 Nina Hi Mike
I enjoyed your minimalist poem and it rem... Apr 12 05, 17:01 Jox Hi Mike,
Great avatar - is it fireworks or someth... Apr 12 05, 17:04 
Billydo Hi James
This is one of the photographs I took of... Apr 12 05, 17:13 1 User(s) are reading this topic (1 Guests and 0 Anonymous Users)
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