 If You Were, What if your lover was the Moon? |
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| Guest_Ivy Rose_* |
 Apr 3 05, 20:27
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If You Were
What if you were the Moon? Would I sail right into you? Get lost in the depths of your heartthrob seas. What if you were a star? Would I glide-glitter into the precipice of your smile? Fill the night with your tune. What if you were the Sun? Would I bask in the heat of your sultry and seductive gleam? See Dawn's rising undone. What if you were everything and everything I wanted was new? Would I be your branch of delight? Touch your heart of gold and noble oak. What if I was a leaf that dangled on your sturdy and steadfast limb? Would you hold me close in the night? Send me on wings of raptured flight. What if you were the Moon? Would you sail right into me? Carry me on a voyage through the sea of your deep liquid eyes. |
  
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| Guest_Nina_* |
Apr 5 05, 14:54
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Hi Sharon
Welcome to MM and I hope you enjoy yourself on here. This is a very romantic, dream-like poem with a clever reversal at the end. Nina |
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Ivy Rose If You Were Apr 3 05, 20:27 
Cleo_Serapis Hello Sharon and another WELCOME to you .
I enjoy... Apr 4 05, 18:00 Zeus˛ Hi Sharon, and a big welcome to MM.
A big romanti... Apr 5 05, 14:09 Jox Hi Sharon,
Welcome to MM - I hope you'll be v... Apr 5 05, 14:35 Toumai Hi Sharon,
A wonderful romantic refrain - and lov... Apr 5 05, 14:48 
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