Beth...
It seems so long since I've seen you on here. Welcome back!
This is, indeed, such a sad tale and, apparently, a personal one. I have a friend who is an undertaker and he tells me that they are hardened to most things but the death of children still causes even them problems.
I'm sorry about your niece - you two sounded very close. I can't tell how recent this was but I do home time passing helps.
This is not a crit forum but, even so, I'd just like to say I think this song very well written. Have you tried to put it to music yet?
All the very best and I hope to see you here more.
Regards, James.
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