Our Grandchild Options

[Guest_Don_*]

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        Ethan Callahan

To friends and loves who would know us best.

For love of life, he is the first awake,
patters down the dark hall floor
and sits tranquil, for our sake,
before our bedroom door.

A glow to know he is warm and fed,
and growing into footprints highbred.


© 2005 by D.E. Holmes
19 February

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Our Grandchild

To friends and loves who would know us best.

For love of life, he is the first awake,
patters down the dark hall floor
to our unopened bedroom door,
and sits tranquil, for our sake.

A glow to know he is warm and fed,
and growing into footprints highbred.


© 2005 by D.E. Holmes
17 February

[Guest_Don_*]

Cybele~~

All of your suggestions are excellent.  

Just Daniel's practice of showing paid off this time.  I confused myself and attempted to mentally exchanging line 2 with 3 instead of L3/4.  I thought, "Gad, what should the first word be?"

Your example showed the way.  

No, I think our children's children are our payback to our own children.  We spoil the little burgers to keep the pot hot.

Thank you.

Don