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post Aug 23 03, 19:09
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Hi Aphro:

Great poem.  I really loved the great words you chose for this piece.  Great Job.

Blessings always,
Your baby sister,
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post Jan 22 05, 14:17
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Hi, Lindi - I've not seen this poem before... it must have been one of the very first postings on MM?

Anyway, as fresh now as then and this line...

"her open door policy abruptly closes"

Brilliant. I hate cliches but I do so appreciate it when cliches are turned in on themselves to create something new - this is an excellent example.

Glad this re-surfaced.

James.
 
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