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post Jan 15 05, 13:08
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Nina
 
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Guest_Jox_*
post Jan 10 05, 07:50
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Hi Fran, thanks for your reply and sorry to make you queasy.

However, my message is not violence; it is peace. We should only kill animals when we have to for our lives' sake (and many people are far more extreme than that).

My poem did not contain anything like as much as the info I just gave in prose. It did not attempt to link wanton violence towards animals with fascism and so on. (Ironic you should say pared-down - I have just replied to your posting in the story thread about that very topic - a cross-over between poetry and prose).

In prose, I think what the poem says is "Why should pheasants not have the equal right to murder people, if people insist on murdering pheasants?" That's all. The rest was an extension - a reason for the poem, I suppose.

I hope the poem said that - did it not? If not, I shall have to revise, yes.

Re: Animal Farm. I don't know but wild animals often kill very nastily... then again, not often for fun (there are exceptions - e.g. foxes). Then again, if they became a comfortable dominant species, who knows...

Thanks very much for sticking with it Fran and I hope you feel better soon.

Best wishes,

James.
 
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- Nina   The Pheasant   Jan 15 05, 13:08
- - Nina   Hi James My post obviously didn't come across...   Jan 15 05, 12:26
- - Jox   Hi Nina, Thanks again for popping back and sticki...   Jan 15 05, 12:50
- - Jox   You're very kind, Nina, Thank you very much.   Jan 15 05, 13:44
- - Jox   © James Oxenholme, 2005. I, James Oxenholme, do as...   Jan 9 05, 18:44
- - JLY   James, this seems like some kind of reversal of fo...   Jan 10 05, 06:55
- - Toumai   Hi, James, I can usually throw myself off the ed...   Jan 10 05, 06:58
- - Jox   Hi John and Fran, Thank you both for commenting. ...   Jan 10 05, 07:24
- - Toumai   Hi James, I was definitely missing the intention....   Jan 10 05, 07:43
- - Cathy   Hi James! I think you have a very valid compl...   Jan 10 05, 09:21
- - Jox   Cathy, Hi... thank you very much - very helpful. ...   Jan 10 05, 09:35
- - Cathy   Others may not see it that way James.  Maybe ...   Jan 10 05, 12:10
- - Jox   Cathy, I've already lost my "MM Minimalist" cr...   Jan 10 05, 12:27
- - jgdittier   Dear James, I'm still new here at least in my ...   Jan 12 05, 15:03
- - Jox   Hi Ron, Thank you very much for your interest an...   Jan 12 05, 16:31
- - Nina   Hi James I read your poem a couple of days ago, w...   Jan 12 05, 16:39
- - Jox   Nina, Hello and thank you. Thanks also for taking...   Jan 12 05, 17:18
- - jgdittier   Dear Jox, From my point of view, in depth discussi...   Jan 13 05, 10:42
- - jgdittier   Dear James, For an example of a "think piece" fail...   Jan 13 05, 11:08
- - Nina   Hi James On the other hand, how do the repressed ...   Jan 13 05, 18:33
- - Jox   Hi Nina, thanks for re-visiting. To be trivial fo...   Jan 15 05, 05:54
- - JohnK   James, This piece did make me chuckle.  I...   Jan 18 05, 10:25
- - Jox   John good to meet you - I'll say Hello properl...   Jan 18 05, 13:03
- - JohnK   Hello James, and apologies for the delay in replyi...   Jan 20 05, 17:23
- - Jox   Hi John. I think we've come to various agreem...   Jan 20 05, 17:37
- - Cleo_Serapis   CONGRATS Jox on your Wizard Award winning tile! ...   Jan 23 05, 09:41
- - Nina   Hi James congratulations on your wizard award. ...   Jan 23 05, 09:53
- - Jox   Lori & Nina, Thank you both very much indeed. Ni...   Jan 23 05, 13:23
- - Toumai   Hi James, A wonderfully thought-provoking piece; ...   Jan 23 05, 14:40
- - Jox   Fran, Thank you very much - you comments mean muc...   Jan 23 05, 15:21
- - Psyche   Hi James ! I love the idea of your poem, but ...   Jan 31 05, 10:47
- - Jox   Hi Sylvia, Thank you very much for your visit and...   Jan 31 05, 12:21
- - Psyche   Hi James ! That was a long doorbell ring. Glad...   Jan 31 05, 18:01
- - Jox   Hi Sylvia... That was a long doorbell ring. More...   Jan 31 05, 18:45
- - Psyche   Me again ! No, you've depressed me even mo...   Jan 31 05, 19:41
- - Jox   Hi Sylvia, Sorry to have depressed you more - not...   Jan 31 05, 20:20
- - Toumai   Hi James, Sylvia, I don't think you're of...   Jan 31 05, 23:44
- - Jox   Hi Fran, Thanks for popping back. Neither of you ...   Feb 1 05, 06:00
- - Nina   Hi James I have been trying to catch up on this f...   Feb 1 05, 16:28
- - Jox   Hi Nina, Good to see you back; thank you. >>I ha...   Feb 1 05, 21:07

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