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Jan 3 05, 07:54
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Group: Gold Member
Posts: 18,829
Joined: 2-August 03
From: Southwest New Jersey, USA
Member No.: 6
Real Name: Daniel J Ricketts, Sr.
Writer of: Poetry
Referred By:Lori
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49er Nuggets are poems of 49 syllables arranged in 13 lines of 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 6 5 4 3 2 and 1 syllables, stating a 'nugget' of wisdom, perspective, insight, information, etc. preferably with a twist. A proper Nugget is to be Titled with a word-twist of some variety as well. I 'invented' the form in Dec, 2004.
Here are a three examples:
ore naught
why would I e’er attempt to make a mark? is there a purpose? should I merely aim to spread a little serendip? it teases me to forge limp, bleating poems seeming pointless ‘till they wake renewed Light
© Daniel J Ricketts 20 Dec 2004
in form I’ll query
Why would I want to kill ambition’s will by ripping form up; would this freedom limit me or others banging heads to get our feelings down in printed booklets, each with pages bound in one accord, no?
© Daniel J Ricketts 21 Dec 2004
‘s no fun
snow falling’s delightful if you see clear across your driveway or don’t work this morning or have waked at a ski lodge but if you’ve got two feet and wife says ‘shove it’ it just feels cold as it blows on red nose
© MLee Dickens’son 28 Dec 2004
Have fun!
deLightingly, Daniel
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Aug 11 22, 09:57
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Group: Gold Member
Posts: 18,829
Joined: 2-August 03
From: Southwest New Jersey, USA
Member No.: 6
Real Name: Daniel J Ricketts, Sr.
Writer of: Poetry
Referred By:Lori
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Yes, I did pick up on the very adept piece/piece usage... and I appreciate the candles too, my good friend!
piece of leg will support the prosthetic with which I'll soon walk after weeks of rehab during which I'll gain balance to prevent my falling kersplat on my face or my tookis disrupting sense of peace
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JustDaniel 49er Nuggets Jan 3 05, 07:54 Jox Hi Daniel,
Happy New Year to you.
These nugget-s... Jan 3 05, 08:15 Cleo_Serapis Happy New Year Daniel and to your new form!
Thi... Jan 3 05, 17:58 JustDaniel Thank you for your kind words, James... and I hope... Jan 7 05, 08:24 Larry Hello Daniel,
I saw your contest on AP about 9 mon... Aug 1 22, 08:46 JustDaniel Heavens, Larry! I don't know how you do t... Aug 8 22, 08:00 Larry Hey Daniel, thanks for your input and for catching... Aug 8 22, 09:27 Larry Daniel, here is another one I wrote today for your... Aug 8 22, 21:33 JustDaniel I promise not to go in my sink!!
chic ‘n’... Aug 9 22, 02:27 Larry Daniel, I wrote this especially for you and what y... Aug 10 22, 11:58 JustDaniel I'm so honored that you should write another o... Aug 10 22, 16:11 Larry Daniel,
I do hope you didn't mind the bad pun... Aug 10 22, 17:34 Larry RECUPERATIONS – TYPE A LONG TOME
WADS WORTH
Rest... Aug 12 22, 20:02 JustDaniel Now that is extremely creative, Larry, and of cour... Aug 12 22, 20:27 Larry Sorry Daniel, didn't mean to be so obtuse. Ye... Aug 13 22, 07:31 JustDaniel mind-
bending
paper wads
pile around you
in case y... Aug 13 22, 12:20 Larry SMILE THROUGH A... – PAINFUL ORDERS
PRAISE PHASE
... Aug 14 22, 12:39 JustDaniel My brain is currently to unfocused to take on a do... Aug 15 22, 06:17 Larry WINDOWS OPENED – SEE YOUR FUTURE
PAIN’S PANES
... Aug 15 22, 15:47 JustDaniel Absolutely eloquent, Larry! Don't know ho... Aug 18 22, 08:03 Larry Thank you Daniel. I know you can do single acrost... Aug 20 22, 15:08 JustDaniel another astounding production, Larry. Wish I coul... Aug 21 22, 07:40 Larry ACROSTIC MAGIC – TAKES SOME TIME
POOR TRAIT PORT... Sep 1 22, 23:34 JustDaniel Another astounding piece, Larry... and lets hope y... Sep 2 22, 09:51 Larry NUGGETS OF GOLD – WON’T BE LOCATED
INSANE IN SEIN... Sep 5 22, 07:32 JustDaniel What is interesting about your REMARKABLE "Nu... Sep 5 22, 17:49 Larry Daniel, how perspicacious of you to recognize the ... Sep 8 22, 11:31 JustDaniel Well, we made it through, and I think everyone was... Sep 9 22, 18:46 Larry WRITE US A DREAM – EXPECT THE BEST
FORM FARM
Wri... Sep 13 22, 00:10 Larry PERFECTION WAS – MERELY MY DREAM
NOTHING ADDS U... Sep 21 22, 23:29 Larry FAIRY RINGS ARE – NICE MUSHROOMS
FOOD FOR THOU... Jan 25 23, 23:03 JustDaniel Unbelievable double acrostic again! Are you ... Jan 26 23, 16:06 Larry Daniel, thank you for your final question. It str... Feb 1 23, 21:27
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