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 Jul 2 17, 15:16
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 Assyrian  Posts: 256 Joined: 2-November 15 From: Croydon, Surrey Member No.: 5,284 Real Name: Antony Glaser Writer of: Poetry Referred By:Eira Rhaposdy  |
The wayfarer finds himself in the Autumn room
The din of outside leaves invites the tremble of truth The man's heart sinks, for he has no tidings Many dark paths has he evaded but the silence of this room is like no other ·······  ·······Imagination fires the soul, resolution the longing.
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Jul 29 17, 14:03
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Assyrian Posts: 256 Joined: 2-November 15 From: Croydon, Surrey Member No.: 5,284 Real Name: Antony Glaser Writer of: Poetry Referred By:Eira Rhaposdy |
Thank you for the comments All gratefully received . I wanted to make the readers feel the room was hermetically sealed, so to give
an idea of the subjects contrasting surroundings. Maybe the rustle of leaves rather than din.. ······· ·······Imagination fires the soul, resolution the longing.
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greenwich Autumn Jul 2 17, 15:16 
JustDaniel Greetings, Anthony!
Here I am again on the fr... Jul 2 17, 16:28 Eisa Hi Antony,
It's good to see you back posting.... Jul 3 17, 16:48 greenwich Thank you Eira for your help. Yes there are too ma... Jul 4 17, 10:54 JustDaniel Does that mean I'm excess fat to be cut off an... Jul 4 17, 11:11 
Ali zonak QUOTE (JustDaniel @ Jul 4 17, 11:11 ) Doe... Jul 4 17, 12:34 greenwich Hi Just Daniel. I additionally followed your advic... Jul 4 17, 12:15 JustDaniel Thank you very much, Anthony. I'm glad that I... Jul 4 17, 12:27 Psyche Hi Antony,
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