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 Jul 2 17, 15:16
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 Assyrian  Posts: 256 Joined: 2-November 15 From: Croydon, Surrey Member No.: 5,284 Real Name: Antony Glaser Writer of: Poetry Referred By:Eira Rhaposdy  |
The wayfarer finds himself in the Autumn room
The din of outside leaves invites the tremble of truth The man's heart sinks, for he has no tidings Many dark paths has he evaded but the silence of this room is like no other ·······  ·······Imagination fires the soul, resolution the longing.
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Jul 4 17, 11:11
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 Ornate Oracle Posts: 19,923 Joined: 2-August 03 From: Southwest New Jersey, USA Member No.: 6 Real Name: Daniel J Ricketts, Sr. Writer of: Poetry Referred By:Lori |
Does that mean I'm excess fat to be cut off and thrown away, Anthony? I'm shocked by the rudeness of your totally ignoring, though I'm glad to see that you corrected the "Autumn" typo.
sLightly put off, Daniel 
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Jul 4 17, 12:34
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 Babylonian Posts: 102 Joined: 22-June 17 From: Arizona, USA Member No.: 5,325 Real Name: Ali Zonak Writer of: Poetry & Prose Referred By:none |
QUOTE (JustDaniel @ Jul 4 17, 11:11 )  Does that mean I'm excess fat to be cut off and thrown away, Anthony? I'm shocked by the rudeness of your totally ignoring, though I'm glad to see that you corrected the "Autumn" typo. sLightly put off, Daniel Two things: Greenwich, at times several "The's" to introduce sentences are quite appropriate and do not at all slow the pace. My opinion. Ali. Daniel, I have come to recognize you as a courteous and helpful man who deserves a 'thank you' for your always helpful critiques. Without you, my own writings would be wasted efforts. Thank you for your steadfast comments.  Ali
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greenwich Autumn Jul 2 17, 15:16 
JustDaniel Greetings, Anthony!
Here I am again on the fr... Jul 2 17, 16:28 Eisa Hi Antony,
It's good to see you back posting.... Jul 3 17, 16:48 greenwich Thank you Eira for your help. Yes there are too ma... Jul 4 17, 10:54 
greenwich Hi Just Daniel. I additionally followed your advic... Jul 4 17, 12:15 JustDaniel Thank you very much, Anthony. I'm glad that I... Jul 4 17, 12:27 Psyche Hi Antony,
I see you've had plenty of good sug... Jul 25 17, 00:02 greenwich Thank you for the comments All gratefully received... Jul 29 17, 14:03 
RC James This is haunting and evocative of the season. Enjo... Sep 26 17, 19:03 1 User(s) are reading this topic (1 Guests and 0 Anonymous Users)
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