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 Jul 2 17, 15:16
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 Assyrian  Posts: 256 Joined: 2-November 15 From: Croydon, Surrey Member No.: 5,284 Real Name: Antony Glaser Writer of: Poetry Referred By:Eira Rhaposdy  |
The wayfarer finds himself in the Autumn room
The din of outside leaves invites the tremble of truth The man's heart sinks, for he has no tidings Many dark paths has he evaded but the silence of this room is like no other ·······  ·······Imagination fires the soul, resolution the longing.
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Jul 4 17, 12:27
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 Ornate Oracle Posts: 19,923 Joined: 2-August 03 From: Southwest New Jersey, USA Member No.: 6 Real Name: Daniel J Ricketts, Sr. Writer of: Poetry Referred By:Lori |
Thank you very much, Anthony. I'm glad that I could be some small help in this free field, where I struggle. One day I'll get up the courage to post another free verse piece. LOL
... and please forgive my appearing to be angry. I really was not... merely hurt a bit. deLighting in your participation here. Looking forward to more of it; respectfully, Daniel 
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greenwich Autumn Jul 2 17, 15:16 
JustDaniel Greetings, Anthony!
Here I am again on the fr... Jul 2 17, 16:28 Eisa Hi Antony,
It's good to see you back posting.... Jul 3 17, 16:48 greenwich Thank you Eira for your help. Yes there are too ma... Jul 4 17, 10:54 JustDaniel Does that mean I'm excess fat to be cut off an... Jul 4 17, 11:11 
Ali zonak QUOTE (JustDaniel @ Jul 4 17, 11:11 ) Doe... Jul 4 17, 12:34 greenwich Hi Just Daniel. I additionally followed your advic... Jul 4 17, 12:15 Psyche Hi Antony,
I see you've had plenty of good sug... Jul 25 17, 00:02 greenwich Thank you for the comments All gratefully received... Jul 29 17, 14:03 RC James This is haunting and evocative of the season. Enjo... Sep 26 17, 19:03 1 User(s) are reading this topic (1 Guests and 0 Anonymous Users)
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