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 Assyrian  Posts: 256 Joined: 2-November 15 From: Croydon, Surrey Member No.: 5,284 Real Name: Antony Glaser Writer of: Poetry Referred By:Eira Rhaposdy  |
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Sometimes here, seems far away, when you're in the lounge, early morning seems to orchestrate yet prevaricates, the possibility of personal change. Wish this could last, longer than a radio show; caught in this rare-field where there is no movement beyond these summoned thoughts Original Sometimes here, seems far away, when you're in the lounge, morning seems to orchestrate yet prevaricates, the possibility of personal change. Wish this could last, longer than a radio show; caught in this rare-field amber: where there is no movement beyond these thoughts summoned. ·······  ·······Imagination fires the soul, resolution the longing.
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Assyrian Posts: 256 Joined: 2-November 15 From: Croydon, Surrey Member No.: 5,284 Real Name: Antony Glaser Writer of: Poetry Referred By:Eira Rhaposdy |
The poem is about not sleeping and being in the lounge in dark morning light. Such is a valued time of quietness where life decisions can be made in this tranquillity.
I read that at 04.00 am devils and angels are in conflict with each other. Rather than rarefield should be used than rarefied. ······· ·······Imagination fires the soul, resolution the longing.
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greenwich Testament Apr 2 17, 17:04 
Eisa Hi Antony - some random thoughts below
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