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 Nov 28 16, 15:33
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 Assyrian  Posts: 256 Joined: 2-November 15 From: Croydon, Surrey Member No.: 5,284 Real Name: Antony Glaser Writer of: Poetry Referred By:Eira Rhaposdy  |
For a shared coffee
she'd seemingly be your confidante promising to dispel your woes. Her flashing green nail polish will lead you to reflection of a forests entrance unlike anything seen. Until your soul wades into a bag of pumpkin seeds. So much for empathy Perhaps this was her smile. Her own barbwire rouge. ·······  ·······Imagination fires the soul, resolution the longing.
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Jun 22 17, 13:28
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 Babylonian Posts: 102 Joined: 22-June 17 From: Arizona, USA Member No.: 5,325 Real Name: Ali Zonak Writer of: Poetry & Prose Referred By:none |
Hi, Greenwich,
brand-new here; your poem is a good one, and I might add that my wife, her best friend Jean, and I just returned from Starbucks. No pumpkin seeds, only great coffee. Enjoyed my first read on this site. Ali ······· ·······~~~~
It is a poem’s absolute perfection that can lead to its imperfection. ~~~~ |
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greenwich The kiss off Nov 28 16, 15:33 
Psyche Hi Antony,
Good one, Antony, but I have to admit ... Nov 28 16, 16:37 greenwich Imagine wading through a packet of pumpkin seeds. ... Nov 29 16, 12:23 
Psyche OMG, Antony, wading thru' pumpkin seeds seems ... Dec 4 16, 00:52 Eisa A powerful lady indeed !
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