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| Guest_Don_* |
 Sep 1 03, 14:39
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MELTED
His grandparents shot in bed; Both at rest, bloody dead. Odious sight for a boy of four, too sick instead to play anymore. He ran a very long mile to relay grim reaper’s smile, “They’re melting,” he implored, “like ice cream flows on floor.” For this child also knew his life was a puddle too. Now his link to love is loss; Society assigned a foster boss. --Don Holmes 1 April 2003 |
  
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| Guest_Brahms_* |
 Sep 1 03, 15:45
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Fine form, based on 'local weariness' sad with
4/1 April Fool's Date note. Brahms |
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Don Melted Sep 1 03, 14:39 
Don Hi Brahams,
April fools day was when I got around... Sep 1 03, 16:14 Arnfinn Hi Don,
Certainly dramatic?
Hmmmmmm...........H... Sep 2 03, 06:56 Zeus˛ Don,
we know it wasn't the butler. This poem w... Sep 2 03, 13:03 
Don QUOTE(Arnfinn @ Sep. 02 2003, 06:56)Hi Don,
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